got to say a very interesting plot.

Where is the rest of the story?
Even if you continue in this formatting, CONTINUE.

Please update the story or at least show us humanity's ineraction with the council races. Pleaseee *puppy eyes*

Excellent story so far! I absolutely love how you set everything up, and I can't wait to see how the story progresses. Keep up the good work!

Lots of potential, but when is it going to be updated?

Ok, the main single problem I have with this fic is the complete lack of interaction between earth and mars even though they knew of each others existence for over a century and a half! (give or take), humans don't work like that, they dig and dig and dig until they are satisfied.

The instant lights were detected on mars, humans would be trying to communicate with them in our own bumbling way.

also, on that tangent, those city lights would be able to be seen by any sufficiently powerful household telescope!... Actually, now that I think about that your probably safe, we are in a closer orbit... meh.

ANYWAY! Humanity wouldn't just ignore a planet full of life completely, especially with the ability to travel and actually TERRAFORM venus! Especially if the entire populace knew of it's existence.

good story so far i can't wait for more

poor turians , batarians and are very cruel person, those 2km reapers would be bullied by your dreadnoughts. Seriously? this is overkill

Can't wait for more of your story! I feel extremely positive about your writing! I believe that Earth and the Mars governments should get along because they are the same race actually, but on different planets. Like Earth and Reach in Halo! However Reach is a fortress world for the UNSC.

Bloody brilliant I must say can't wait to see what the Galaxy looks like now, since the citadel council may be destroyed or in near collapse. Hope the Glorious Terran union works toward unification with mars if not the Terran union should crush them immediately they are in the way of Terran progress.

Just brilliant hope the next update is soon and also really curious about that planet with 20th century level of technology.

keep up the good work :)

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I am hopeful though I fear a recycled plot line at Shanxi. I have become very tired of the standard plot line of humans loose in space than invasion starts than human fleet shows up kicks Turian ass and negotiations start with Asari. This is the point that the author than jumps ahead to the Shepard arc of the story. I hope you try something more original.

Soooo is this fic still alive? I would really like to see another chapter soon!

Just found this story. Looks like a good start.

keep it up :)

What so only white people exist in your story? Stupid Fuck