How did Aomine kiss me on the forehead while he was still inside me? Can he bend over like that?

Your writing style is very good and clear. I really like the way you describe things and lead us readers to the next scene. Well done! :)

This is the first time I've ever read something like this, and holy fuck, I think I'm dead.

asdfghjkl /faints /dies of moeee

That was really good! Thumbs up! :)