It'll be interesting to see how things go from here.

Interesting chapter, I like to see some strategic sense in shinobi. I also like how Jiraiya and Logan didn't just hash it out in a brawl of misunderstanding.
But I am concerned for Kushina, being targeted like she was, and most likely still will be.

Great story! When is the next chapter coming out?

Awesome, simply awesome.
The depth of the villages hater for Kushina and feared her ability. I also like how Logan was just trying to find Kushina, as nothing else mattered to him. I simply can't wait for chapter 6

nice story. i've always wanted someone to write a good wolverine/naruto story where orochimaru is the one who experimented on him & after he gets free wants to kill him.

Oh dear, there's a couple of link able abilities.

You are forgetting punctuation all over your chapter. If it were a single or even a handful of times I could look it over. But it's. All. Over. The. Chapter. You don't use question marks. Don't use points to end your sentences, you don't use ANY of them nearly enough.

Look the chapter over, add the points, comma's, question marks and exclamation marks when appropriate and it will have a much better look and feel.

Look, don't take my review as a flame but as the constructive criticism it was meant to be. I tend to be very hard on spelling and grammar but those are essential to any story anyway. I take pride in my own writing and I would want to improve it as much as I can and I am assuming the same goes for you as well.

Kingdark

Awesome chapter

That was relly good

I want to see more

I can already tell you this is goin to get good

this is so epic

this is so good

very good, loved