That was a good read!thanks for sharing!

That was wonderful

Damn poor kris hans is such a bastard

*Spoiler*

Ooh elsa is a .. and anna, always a charmer lol

I wonder what’s with the necklace could she only drink from the one wearing it

That was creepy omg

I have a chance to read this now. And omg dark au I’m excited :D

I'm Greek thanks for vrykolakas

I really just love the word Vrykolakas. The story is amazing, everything wove together really well at the end. I kind of want to know more about the hag but I like how the "mastermind" type villain isn't ever actually in the story, just mentioned and in memories. I wonder what she would do about their escape from the spell.
I really thought you might kill Anna, but I felt like you'd decided to spare her. I like that you spared her, the goofs deserve happiness. Poor Kristoff though.
I was surprised you gave them the out to be mortal again though. I was expecting them to "give" the necklace to each other and loophole out of it that way. I like being surprised, it makes the story more interesting. Also I recently read the Killing Jar and now "all that lives must die" for Elsa and Anna which is a necessary price to get out of the curse. (I paraphrased that quote, but it's the same gist.) By the way, that's a good book. I could have done without the "it's a teen fiction book it has to have a love triangle" but that could kind of be ignored. It's a really gray protagonist which is my favorite kind, because life isn't good and evil it's everybody just doing what they can to survive and find happiness. Just thought I'd mention it if you wanted to read it ... Well I mentioned it for the relevant part but I described it a little in case you wanted to read it... Yeah. Sorry. I'm going to force myself to stop now.
Thank you for sharing, I really loved it!

Aw, ten years later and no mention of Elsa needing a haircut? ;P

(You did say 'stray thoughts'. lol)

You've used 'forever' a few times since the spell was broken. I know now that that means for as long as they live, but considering the story has a lot to do with immortality and all, it was kind of confusing. I kept second quessing myself, 'the spell is broken, but Elsa has magic... maybe she (and Anna) are still immortal after all'. But then you did say 'mortal' a few times, so... I don't know, just seemed a little contradictory. Maybe you could've said 'for as long as they lived' or something like that, since forever implies, well.. FOREVER. Anyway, I'm rambling. Sorry.

I really did enjoy the story. It was a fun ride. :) Thanks so much for sharing!

So, wait... The spell was broken and they're mortal again now, but Elsa can still do magic? I didn't think she would be able to, which made me wonder how they got home in a carriage again, but it's cool that she still can. :) Does that mean Anna could do magic too, if she learned how?

Since I found this when it was complete and I know there are 3 chapters left, I'm going to hope that Elsa figures out some way to help Anna, so I'm not going to say much about that. Except that... Poor Elsa, seeing another person she loves die... :( That's what the spell was for after all.

I was so happy to see that Anna figured out everything on her own. The good stuff, I mean. She knew that Elsa had stopped feeding from her and that she genuinely cares for her. :)

I just found this and have really been enjoying it so far. It's interesting and it's fun trying to piece together Elsa's history.

Anyway, this one confuses me a bit, though. First, I'm not quite sure why Hans had to go through all of that to find Elsa. He found her once with the dagger, why wouldn't he just do it the same way again? (I'm anxious to find out the whole dagger/necklace connection...) Anyway, there's that, but also... I'm not sure why they did it that way. What good was not letting Kristoff talk? They could have still read his thoughts. I liked that though, just wish you'd have done a bit more with it. Like maybe instead of killing him, they could have used that to hold over him as an incentive, that could have been his punishment for not 'talking'/ not answering with nods and whatnot. *shrug* It just seemed a little pointless, but I still really liked the concept. - Too bad they killed him... Poor Anna. :( She shouldn't have told him, especially since she promised she wouldn't.

This was exceptional. Very well done! Less-than-three

-spooths

Great story, I really loved it. However, one thing that I personally would've liked changed would be that, instead of the curse breaking when they struck the necklace with the dagger, Anna and Elsa should have been changed to where they could "feed" from sexual energy when created between the two, instead of only being able to feed on blood. I'm now going to be reading your other stories, they all seem to be very goof, just like this one! You'll be getting a bit of spammed reviews from me, so I hope that doesn't bother you!

A nice final, sad but very beautiful. I love it. Was so sad for Anna to find her brother died, but with Elsa she'll find the strength to go on. A wonderful fic again my great friend, like all you write.