| Reviews for A Tempest of Ash |
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   Tala White 14 chapter 14 . 9/13/2017 I absolutely love the chapter titles. They're so fitting or beautifully ironic some of the times. Gosh, great job! |
| Tala White 14 chapter 10 . 9/13/2017 Perfection :) |
| Ardoa88 chapter 16 . 6/13/2017 Awesome. Awesomeawesomeawesome! I love happy endings and that was the best one yet! With a little tease at the end ;) amazing job. I applaud you for writing such a brilliantly concocted, well developed, and 110% awesome story. Thank you. |
| Ardoa88 chapter 15 . 6/13/2017 Hahahahahaa. You did it again! "I'm glad you're not dead" "how long have I been gone?" "Six months" "I am so dead" Hahahahahaa... Ahh... So good. Final chapter? What nooooo! But this has been such a good story! Captivating and energetic and well thought out and just... Awesome! |
| Ardoa88 chapter 13 . 6/13/2017 Ooh, I hate that cliffhanger- it's too good! Gotta keep reading now! |
| Ardoa88 chapter 10 . 6/13/2017 "We're... Crash?" HAHAHAHAHAA... I love these little nods to the cartoon. This is great! You captured the characters wonderfully! And the plot is captivating. Also... "Are we or are we not on mode!?" "Oh! We're not on mode." Hehehe. It all clicks for kid flash :) great chapter! |
| Ardoa88 chapter 7 . 6/13/2017 Yay! Bart is officially a speedster! And btw your chapter titles are unusually poetic. Is there some secret with the titles? Hrm... |
| Ardoa88 chapter 3 . 6/13/2017 Argghhh! So interesting! I need to know what happens next! But I skipped a chapter so I better leave a review. Okay, so I love how you've spun Wally's understanding and reaction to realizing he's in the future. And Bart's reaction was believeable- I understand that before he had the hope of changing the future he may not have been his cheery 'impulse'-ive self. And I love nightwing's determination in this chapter. Great job! Gotta keep reading :D |
| Ardoa88 chapter 1 . 6/13/2017 Amazing first chapter! I don't remember how Wally 'died' in the cartoon- but I am totally about to binge read this fanfic. I usually try to leave a review for each chapter but you left such a great cliffhanger I might miss a few reviews in the process ;) can't wait to read more! |
| YellowWeather chapter 17 . 4/21/2017 Wow. This was really good! Super creative too! |
| rosypenderwick chapter 16 . 2/27/2017 Okay so in all seriousness, this is a wonderful story and you are a wonderful writer. With your talent for keeping each character, storyline and relationship believable, your adeptness with fight scenes and dialogue, and your concise, colorful writing style, you have created one of the best stories that I've read in a very long time. Thank you so much! |
| rosypenderwick chapter 15 . 2/27/2017 I can't remember where it was that you said you weren't sure about how well you wrote the fight scenes but anyway I thought they were written beautifully. |
| rosypenderwick chapter 14 . 2/27/2017 Merry Late Christmas and thank you for this story. This chapter gave me high blood pressure. |
| rosypenderwick chapter 13 . 2/27/2017 well dang |
| rosypenderwick chapter 12 . 2/27/2017 I really like how you included Jason in Bart's story |
