That sucks cuz I actually liked this story

um could you translate this in english please

Um I don't know what you put in the last chapter of the story but I'm hoping you continue

Yeah he saved Neji from his darkness.

And you're as equally pathetic as him, filthy fucking Kishimoto lovers.

I had to use the Bing Translator to find out wth you said. Couldn't you have posted the message twice once in Spanish, which I assume is your first language, and a repeat in English?

Anyways this did seem like an interesting story, might I suggest for future reference, a seal or barrier that disturbs the flow of Yin based chakra? Perfect in case Naruto comes across someone with a Sharingan that makes them intangible, hint hint, Obito.

I just thought of something. In a story by someone can't recall who right off the top of my head. I think it's called Naruto The True Uzumaki Naruto is able to summon the Aedolans from Final Fantasy XIV, well why not have his summons for another story be the Guardian Forces from FF VIII this includes: Ifrit, Shiva, Quezocotl, Siren, Brothers, Carbuncle, Diablo, Tonberry, Cerberus, Jumbo Cactaur, Alexander, Doomtrain, Bahamut, Leviathan, Pandemona, Eden...I think that's all of them there could be more and I just don't remember them.

Why not make it a full three way cross over and have Naruto be able to summon different Pokémon? For example a Haunter that knows Shadow Ball, Shadow Sneak, Night Shade, and hypnosis. Or a Lucario that knows Bullet Punch, Aura Sphere, Dragon Pulse, and Force Palm. How about a Snivy that not only knows Leaf Storm but also has the ability Contrary(that way when it uses Leaf Storm its power increases rather than decreases.

Those songs you named, I'm pretty sure I've heard of them. Correct me if I'm wrong but weren't they used in Ocarina of Time? Actually I'm pretty sure they were Bolero of Fire was the song needed to see Darunia.

Why does your description of "Uta" sound so much like the ever cute and musical Meloetta?

I don't understand your note *sweatdrops*

nice starting chapter!

In otherwords, a Kishimoto, pansy-ass Naruto. Fuck no.

Translation please, can't read Spanish.

Approximate Translation: Please if anyone is in contact with BigCC, send a PM to talk with me. I've been trying to contact them but no luck. And the same with Yinshadow