je n'aime pas ! trop compliqué ! on du mal à comprendre l'histoire !

That damned writer of this series did a good show of leaving a complex jumbled up plot which people(fans) are still decoding...

This is really good I've already finished but I was to lazy to go back to chap 50 any way like when you said that Allen isn't junior until that point I just thought to C.C. sent him back after deageing him but after you said that Allen isn't junior I was like oh! Wait Junior asked C.C. to help his dad and I was like OMG! The dads Allen! Any way I read this all in one day and I'm glad you wrote this cause this is awesome and funny in some places and solom In others I don't know if this is a good review but eh.

How many people are writing this story? O_O

I am so confused. The time skips make no sense to me. O_O

Are you kidding me? No offense really, but honestly, how unoriginal can you get? Here, Neah calls Walker "Moyashi" —even though that is plenty illogical!— Yuu calls both Mary and Allen "Moyashi". What the bloody hell is up with that?! What is this?! A "Moyashi" family?! Arrgh! /pulls at my hair in frustration/ Which also reminds me, I noticed that the past Yuu is not, in any way or form, different than the current one. Fancy that! /note the sarcasm/ He should be, at least, somewhat different! From what I gathered he was nowhere as bitter as he is in the present — he became that way because of the Second Exorcist Project. And well, death changes a person. He was actually kind before and even smiled! Not to mention, his hair was definitely shorter, and a light brown/almost blond in color! Haven't you read the manga or watched the anime or something!
And really I'm no expert in the anatomy, neurology, physiology or anything remotely scientific regarding infants, but I'm pretty sure that few days old children do not speak. They shouldn't be able to! I mean obviously there is a reason, or some, that it takes at least a couple YEARS after they're born, before infants are able to pronounce something, right? Aside from the language barrier that is.

P. S. I'm not sure if I'm done yet, but that's all I have to say at the moment.

I kinda have a request, I realize you probably won't do it but what's the harm of asking, anyway I love your works since we don't get to see much kid Allen and I was wondering if you could do one with Allen getting de-aged or something like that, back into Red? You don't have to feel pressured into it but I would appreciate it if you would. Also this story is really good a lot different than what I normally read but it was really interesting thx for making it.

Lol that was perfect! (Unlike Allen Senior's eyesight) XD

pfft...I like it! this is hilarious!

Aaw what a nice resolution. This was a great fic to read, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Happy end~

Aaah I'm so late reading this but my feels!

Fantastic and amazing work. You are so awesome making this story, I 'm like super confused at first chapters, I almost abandoned reading it at first but when I continued reading this story of yours I always crying at the end of some chapters. I almost believed this the major canon of d gray man almost. There are some parts that are really close in the story of d gray man. But oh well. Thanks for making this story. So sad Lavi is not in the story well, I saw him when Allen woke up, then at the end Lavi was the one telling it. Lavi Bokman Jr, I salute you. (••)7

Author-san thank you for making this story.(••)7

oh my gosh! It's so...UWAHHHHH! ;V; It feels! I love this very much!

so this is the last chapter?

Oh...this is the final chapter, so finally they have won the Holy War but the Allen we know was left on a wheelchair. So everyone are happy with this new ending. Nice fanfic, I get that this needs a lot of planning to get it work great. And Allen's wife is in Cross possession, Grave of Maria. Great work. I hope to read more DGM fanfic from you soon.