Reviews for Indoctrination
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2018
Two words: badly written. Please edit your sloppy writing.
mss-may-hem chapter 8 . 7/13/2016
Damn Dumbledore is a manipulative f**k! I'm glad Hedwig is okay. Harry really can't take much more tragedy. Please update soon!
Jess chapter 2 . 10/30/2015
Oh yay, yet another story romanticizing child abuse. You have an odd fetish.
crankypants16 chapter 7 . 10/29/2015
poor Harry. and I want to beat Dumbledore with a stick
Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 8 . 10/28/2015
Good fine and finally
Sesshomaru8282 chapter 7 . 9/14/2015
Intresting can't wait for an update!
AcadianProud chapter 7 . 9/12/2015
Just discovered your story and really enjoying it.
Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 7 . 9/11/2015
Love yhe snake
Lorteck chapter 7 . 9/11/2015
Draco would be the worst houseguest ever, I can just see Snape biting mad at chewing at the bit to prevent doing something drastic. I liked that part with Harry and Volos, because it helped give a better understanding of what Potter is thinking. Great update!
HeartsGlow chapter 5 . 8/26/2015
He left Hedwig! She'll die with no one to feed her!
HeartsGlow chapter 3 . 8/26/2015
You didn't say what happened to Hedwig.
Sevvus chapter 6 . 8/23/2015
awwwwwwwww
Guest chapter 6 . 8/21/2015
nice ! )
Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 6 . 8/20/2015
Nice chapter
Lorteck chapter 6 . 8/20/2015
Snape's voice would have such a calming effect, if he didn't use it to terrorise the young ones. I'm glad to see him in a nicer role here, and I wouldn't put it past Dumbledore to want to send Harry back to his relatives despite everything else. Great update!
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