Yeah well man you have no business being jelouse when you just called Verona your "mate"! (*scoff*)
I'm hoping he just said that in the heat of the moment to get back at Aza for pushing him aside but well...idk
Like I really think Verona is more like a sister to him and he might have had romantic intreast in her in the past, kinda like his first real 'like-like' ya know? But it's something that he got over and he just cares for her as family now. And I think the same in regards to Aza and Azriel's relationship but hey in the end I don't know jack!
Anyways, I really like this so far, it's a very intreasting plot and Ava is pretty awsome! I do kinda painfully must admit I sorta ship Aza and Thranduil, but first they need to clear stuff up! I hope they're end game though~

Okay wait so Evanna and Aza have it for each other? Like if it weren't for one thing or the other they would be together in a romantic way or something? Or was that meant to just refer to their friendship/sisterly love?
This is a pretty cool fic so far! I live that its druing Thran-Thran's youth too! Though I'm all sorts of confused as to who he'll end up with! Like wth? Love triangle much? Then again Aza doesn't really seem to care for him like that and she mentioned being promised to another? Tbh I don't really like Verona either though I do hope she ends up becoming genuine friend with the girls. And like that she doesn't end up with Thran/turns out he doesn't love her like that... dun dun duuuun

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This was pretty intense, I really enjoyed this chapter, it was a pretty good read.

poor thranduil

nice ch

oh my goodness! I love you story. It's different and has a modern twist in a sense. It's definitely unique. I'm obsessed _. I can't wait to read more. in the beginning I was concerned it was to on the modern terminology with the swearing and informal behaviors but it worked together. Excellent work!

great ch

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I enjoyed seeing how you wrote the healing scene with Kingsfoil - it's always interesting to compare notes on how different authors write healing scenes and what they focus on. I liked your use of the detail of the golden ash. Nice touch! Your healer character is pretty quirky, so I got a big kick out of her.

Ooh. Interesting development! I liked the big reveal moment. Very dramatic.

I enjoyed your action sequence. Great direction and pacing, I thought! Very tense!

So... I am SUPER pumped about finding another Thranduil romance to read! There's just not enough people out there writing good Elvenking romances.

I liked the intro so far, and I also really appreciate that this story is about a young Thranduil before he becomes king.

Please please please please please hurry with the next chapters!