No! Nonononononono! Please, PLEASE finish this! Please. This story is a true work of art, not to mention that I will tear myself piece from piece not knowing how it ends. Please, please finish this story.

Please continue.

Please continue! I don't mean to obligate you, but this is great! I started reading this years ago, but my beginner reading wouldn't let me understand.
Not your fault, of course. Now I realize I was undeniably...how do I say this... Stupid? to not realize what a masterpiece of creative and writing ability this is.

I realize you last updated this two years ago, and it might be abandoned, but please try not to leave me hanging! I know it's a lot of pressure, so sorry again.

I hope you keep expressing and creating in writing, this is a talent that cannot be wasted!

Oh my word! This is superb. I love your human!Vision. He's so vulnerable and sweet. I can't wait to see if he kept any of his powers. :D

(and he's met Coulson in the flesh!)

Is it possible that we, and by that I mean you write, a scene where Vision gets captured? Or, or! He gets really hurt, defending the public. Either works for me, both would be a dream come true.

Wait wait wait that's it? No no no please continue this! I have loved reading every chapter and the way you write Vision is so well-done and in character and his interactions with the rest of the characters are spot-on for all of them and I really want to read more! Especially because his training is just about to begin ... I love how this fanfic explores Vision's more human nature and how he must learn to cope with human pains and emotions, and you wrote well the scenes in which he explored his own identity and sense of self. I particularly loved the swing dance scene (I'm Scarlet Vision shipper trash) as well as every other scene. I look forward to future chapters!

This is super duper duper duper amazing! Please oh please continue!

Well shit.

Awesome 8 chapters! This is brilliant! :)

hm, magic... interessting.

Sif, Trainer of Asgard. *distant sounds of youth warriors whimpering* I love it.

(also: how far up on AOS are you? I've only seen s01, but now that 2 is out on Netflix I can catch up, I just wanted to avoid spoilers if you were going to put one in before I did so.)

I wonder if Vision would be able to sense Loki-Odin, (or Thanos, for that matter...) after his vague memories of the Mind Gem and Loki's controlling it. If he ever makes it to Asgard, that is.

Hey, has he tried picking up Mjolnir yet? cause I bet he's still worthy. :)

Yay! You're amazing at Vision, so please, please, please, continue soon!

Damn, LOL, the last part threw me for a loop. Didnt expect that. Giddy for the next chapter now. Hurry!

*shakes head* Jemma and Fitz, why the panic? Friday, why not surveiling? Vision, why conflate Friday's Irish accent with Fitz's Scottish just because they're both brogues? Ah well. It's very Coulson. I hope he and Vision do get to have a chat about dying at the hands of power mad aliens - I'm so happy our SHIELD team is here!

Yay! Getting into more plot! Can't wait to see -if- Vision gets his stone back!

the worst thing about it is they /sort/ of have a point, and Vision knows that. However, they really don't at all, and he's trying to know that too.
(could someone point out if New York didn't have superheroes, Thanos would have gone after the police? that no one would BLAME the police for being a threat to supervillains and therefore a target? (not that... muggle police would be much of a threat, but still.)

I just really like how you're exploring the Vision here.
It wasn't too dramatic at all- he's going through a lot, and it wasn't needless drama, but a legitimate reaction to stress.
poor bby just wants to keep everyone safe... ;)