Absolutely great continuation of the story. Nicely done and I wish you'd continue it, although it seems very unlikely with so much time gone by... Pretty Please?
One can hope

This is pretty great. Too bad it hasn't been updated in forever. If you're still alive you should continue this. I mean, even if you're dead you should continue this xD But that's asking a lot.

This is pretty fantastic. The characters are portrayed as they should be and the writing is very good. Please keep this going! I really appreciate a story where they are reunited but don't instantly run into each other's arms and live happily ever after. I'm also glad that you are avoiding the anime and following the original storyline more honestly. All in all, wonderful work, please continue!

Ah! Great story! Please please please please please please continue!

More please! And some smut or sour fruits maybe? ;)

This was indeed very nice to read. :)

I have a thing for proper grammar and spelling, and the language you use makes your words flow easily.

Please continue this story, it is quite enticing.

Well I suppose I should review this, because it's unusual to find a fanfiction this good.
You've done a great job with characterization; both Nezumi and Shion are quite like their canon selves (and this is so very hard to find). You have a solid prose style, and you've created an interesting storyline. Hope you continue this fanfiction; it's a diamond in the rough.
xx~

More please you write soooo good so keep at it my darling friend wordsmith ;)

Absolutely beautiful. There are so many moments I want to quote and pick out, and say things like "this is particularly beautiful" but honesty, it all works together and compliments itself. My kind words are of no need. If you don't know this is a wonderful piece of writting, you are mad.

The story gave me so much joy, and I greatly hope you intend to continue it.

Great story, I really love the way you describe the characters. :D (But seriously, Torey go away, let Shion alone.)

I loved especially the Karan scene...god, I love her. X'D She's so great. But I'm getting nervous because of Shion's father now... urgh. The end of the chapter was very nice.
*sighs* ;_;

A great contunuation of Beyond. I hope you'll continue it soon.

This fic continues to be an quality contribution to the No. 6 fandom, with a compelling maturity in the writing and deep characterization. I do hope that you continue - this is not getting the number of reviews that it should.

One thing that confuses me is the jump between the end of Ch 1 and the beginning of Ch 2 - at the end of Ch 1, Shion locks himself in his bedroom, and in Ch 2, he is sleeping by the couch. Did he wake up early, emerge from his bedroom, and fall asleep again by the couch?

Will you continue this? I like its density and richness, and its believable characterizations - Shion doesn't just fall into Nezumi's arms, but has to deal with his own anger and sense of betrayal. The fic doesn't rehash familiar emotional territory, instead developing a compelling, "what happens next" plot. Anyone who has read "Beyond" knows who the rapacious miner is, but I believe there is much more story to tell. I hope you decide to tell it; please don't leave us with a cliffhanger like Asano did at the end of "Beyond"!

AUGH THAT WAS LOVELY.
I do hope you'll write more. XD you have some really powerful lines that just squeeeeeeeze the heart. I especially loved the Whitman recitation scene... There was just so much sexual tension there f jhsrfbsjvnsdicjsi I'm speechless. XD Thank you for sharing. :)

Ah! I love it, I do hope you make more it's amazing!