tifa saying to cloud shame we are tired i would love having mount strife pound my valley

tifa saying to cloud hey my chocobo head idiot kiss me right now

Tifa to cloud you know you did not have to leave our hometown to become like the nutjob i was going to ask you to my bf that night at the water tower your ass should have stayed in our home town with me and before you ask I don t give a fuck if my father had a problem with us dating back then

cloud should have stayed in his hometown instead of going to join soldier that way he and tifa could have gotten married

Ugh, just no words, except you definitely have a way with them.

OoWEE! That moment Tifa locks eyes with Cloud as she takes the lime was HOT!

Just like all the rest, I adore this :) I love how you convey such subtle yet profound moments between these two characters. I also love how the sentiment is unspoken - its exactly as how I would imagine they would interact on a regular basis. The lack of dialogue seems to accentuate the somber/bittersweet undertone of this story. Great work, as always!

Oooooh!

Very nice ending line there-it's always nice when a story can wrap up nicely like that. I got shivers!

Always breaks my heart to think of how fast Tifa and Cloud were forced to grow up. But that's what makes them so special, eh?

Fave line: 'the starlet given top billing in the scene unfolding before him'

Kudos!

Aw lovely one shot. Great quality writing too.

I never get tired of reading these

This was quite beautiful. I love that despite the pain and anguish their circumstances have brought them, they still wouldn't trade their lives for anything. After all, even though they've both lost so much, they've also gained things that are precious and irreplaceable. You did such an awesome job conveying that. Thanks for the read and I hope to see more from you.

good one!

Amazing use of language, very beautifully written :) you captured so much in the last paragraph it's so beautiful. No one understands them more than they do each other.

Aw this is quite bittersweet. I wonder if they would be like that if they hadn't been the ones to save the world but then again, they wouldn't be themselves if they hadn't, would they?

I like this because after everything, they seem finally happy. They've grown up way too quick so it's kinda nice that they have each other. They both understand one another just by looking into each others eyes and it's so endearing.

Love it! _~ that last paragraph was so poetic! lol _~

This is very well-written, albeit unremarkable (though CERTAINLY better than most everything that's posted to this site). The sentence structure and composition is on-point, it's just that the writing is somewhat forgettable. Spice up your descriptions and you'll be good.