I really like how you articulate the combat. It's a lot more imaginative than the "I hit you, you hit me until one of us dies" stuff that I've read elsewhere. Interesting to see Sora release his darkness, considering Riku's already mastered his. It would be awesome if eventually Sora could enter his anti-state willingly. Looking forward to future updates )

Did he do what i think he did?! That is it I am killing Cole when I get my hands on him. It is bad enough that Sora was that tired and now he has made him release his darkness. He is so in trouble. Kairi is going to kill him... I'm going to kill him. Where is mickey with the help they are supposed to get? He is taking way too long for a gumi ship that is set on warp. Why do I think this is going to get worse before it gets better. Looking forward to seeing how they explain to everyone what happened. The Islands are about to be one of the few places that know of the other worlds. Sooooo looking forward to the next chapter. Hope to hear from you soon.

P.S. And yes I can't wait for the next game to come out. I had such a big fan girl moment when I saw the opening. It was so embarrassing as it was in front of my family.

Don't worry! I'll wait as long as you need. Three boss heartless attacking at once. That is not fair. Love Cole and Sora's relationship. Did Roxas really need to put his two cents in? Although it was funny, really Roxas? Nice idea Riku but could have gone really wrong. Where is the king? Didn't Riku contact him? He should be coming to help and hope that they get there soon. Well looking forward to next time

Great battles in this chapter, especially Riku's battle.

Well done I really like this. So what is Cole hiding and how is he talking about that is doing this to the island? I like the excuse you came up with... Captured by pirates HA! Well the cat is out of the bag now. So are Mickey and Master Yen Sid going to come and talk to everyone about what they have been doing? Is this only happening on the island or is it happening in other worlds? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh dang. Triple boss fight time! This battle was intense- like, 1000 Heartless battle intense. Can't wait for the next chapter.

And things have started heating up! Sora and Kairi sharing the Paopu fruit was cute... until Roxas made it hilarious by breaking the fourth wall. Did the Heartless come from that door?Was the Keyblade Kairi summoned Oblivion or Destiny's Embrace, I wonder? And is the girl that Riku found important? What was the creature Cole destroyed? How does he have dark powers? And did that creature summon the Heartless? I'm sure these questions will be answered in the future; for now, great job!

Good job. Roxas was particularly hilarious in this chapter. As for Kingdom Hearts, I'm gonna break the fourth wall and tell them they'll find out in KHIII. Here's hoping for some romance next chapter.

The Heartless are back! Why? Who brought them back?

What is with Cole? And who's his mysterious noncorporeal friend?

Looking forward to the next chapter. Wonder what's up with Kairi?

Wonder who that Cole guy is. And how on earth can Kairi emit any darkness? She's supposed to have a heart of pure light!

Ha ha, the surprise is on them! Good job with this chapter. I'm surprised that Roxas and Namine were accepted so easily.

Good job. I guess they really can't go back to life before the destruction of their home. And Riku's reaction to being awakened was hilarious.