Can we add Miyu on Six's relationship? That'd be a sight to behold.

Nice

Well done. And good luck on the next one

I am kind of upset you revised the story but also exited to see more updates to the new one good luck.

As of now I haven't read anything of this story. But reading the Author's note, when you said"Goof feeling..." I was like, I have a bad feeling about this. (Yes you did say goof, not good)

Wow. Powerful ending to the chapter. Great work on this one.

I read all of this in the course of 2 days and holy shit it's great, awesome job. I swear to god if six comes all this way to die from a poison I'm gonna be super depressed for like a week. Excellent work and I look forward to future installments.

Well, Six is dead. I mean, that's what he gets for being a FUCKING XENOS-LOVING HERETIC! PURGE THE ALIEN, THE HERETIC, THE MUTANT! FOR THE GOD-EMPEROR!

Sorry for taking so long to review.

Really enjoyed how he came to the conclusion that he was poisoned. He pulled a gun on civilians even though he knew they were no threat and Krystal was able to help him heal his past. So why is he now so controlled by his anger? It was a subtle way to show that something isn't quite right. Do hope that he is a bit selfsh and asks for a doctor check up. On the battlefield, its understandable their not going to do a full diagonistic. Their are to many wounded and dying to treat every injury and its easy to see how his infection could be overlooked. Yet when a doctor knows the problem and has time, that would be a huge help.

Like the detail with government buildings being sturdier than most other buildings. A bank is something you keep things of value so of course you want its walls to be thick. Its also very true about real life I never noticed until you pointed it out.

Another amazing chapter, I'm very glad to hear you wish to stick around for the long haul. You are one of the few authors I've run into that capture emotion and interaction perfectly. I can't wait to read what comes next for Krystal and Six, although I am saddened to hear about his illness. Finger's crossed that he will be cured.

Fine chapter.

Love.

I know this has nothing to do with the chapter buuut. Does the last paragraph mean that you are axing faded light? I really hope not. That is the only destiny story right now worth following in FF.

I know what you mean. they mention collage or work I hear death bell tolls for any story I follow of theirs.

Six is still going to Die anyway!? Better take years, since I rather at least have Six get a better ending than a replay of Reach where he dies in war!

Seriously, John-117 and the rest of Blue Team lived through the war! Why not Six? At least have him die with a loving family, Maybe have him give Krystal and Miyu some kids before he goes!

Would Find it amusing if he names One, Jorge. I mean, Jorge seemed to be as close as a friend as Six could have had.