Reviews for Claude Obeyed
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
Only thing wrong with this is 99.9% of times most people don't tell anyone they've been raped ;
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2019
Jesus Christ! That’s deep. Thank you!
Miette Delphonse chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
omg the feels ;-; and... to be honest I actually relate to this.
florencemiengott chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
Sebastian and Claude are soul eating demons from hell. I think if Claude was really order to rape Sebastian it's be seriously creepy in a s&m kind of way. They're DEMONS. Rape, I'm assuming, is something they probably did and do. Plus they are hundred (if not thousands) and years old so I'm assuming they're reactions wouldn't be so dramatic. And Ciel definitely wouldn't be so sympathetic...
AngelDivineBell chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
I agree, that's horrible, Sebastian is very nice indeed, I can't imagine what it feels like, I have many wishes, and stopping rape is one of them, on my top ten, to people everywhere in this nation, I wish freedom for all, but not to those who are wrong and dirty.
Merodi Pinku chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
This has me in tears, thank you! I totally agree!
BVBGirlPerfectWeapon chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
I love that someone finally pointed out what rape is really about. It's easy to pretend that it's cute and sexy with fictional characters. I really do like how the characters all had human emotion, and that said emotions matched the real-life situations.
My only comment is that the part that says, "Yes Master," Sebastian nodded slowly, "He did obey his master." Sebastian usually says, "My (young) lord." I know it's kinda random, but it would help with the characters staying relatable to the other characters.
Other than that, it's all great; really good point behind the story :)
Luchia-chan chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Well, I guess it's hard to write such a story in-character... So they seem VERY OOC in my opinion.

Sebastian has said in the manga that he is not capable of feeling emotions which can make him cry. He can't cry, he said.

Still, it's refreshing to see a story which takes rape seriously. Because I'm kind of sick of the stories which do not treat rape with the horror it deserves.
hetaliaalfredfjones chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
M-more...Please...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
I really like this story and it has potential for more chapters
Keep up the good work
Miyuki chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Any idiot thinks rape sexy should experience it :(
Miyuki chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Any idiot thinks rape sexy should experience it. :(
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
It's true, not all of us are "decent human beings" and do indeed find pleasure in vile and perverted things. It's nice to see someone proudly stand up for their ethics and understanding of "decent," especially in a world that has many different beliefs as to what "decent" actually is. Good job.
NHarmonicschool chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
it is good, a little ooc on ciel's part as he is corrupted by evil- but its still good! i luv it (in a tragic way) and i agree with the emotional break-down thing, rape is horrible but i think the point, of some, some people are just prevs, of those stories is to show that the companionship of a lover or friend can help a person to overcome their hardships and to grow stronger for them. this story kind of hints to them helping sebastian get past what happened to him, not forget but more like except it and move on- ramble, ramble, ramble; anyways good job, plz continue to write on
AkUmaXxXtEnsHi chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
Uwah! Even though its a rape theme but its cute! The comfort, I mean :

Can you do a CielxClaude rape next? Only a few stories have those :c
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