Your story is one of the best Forever fics out there, but you did make a few mistakes.
Hispanics are not a race. The label is typically used to refer to someone from a Spanish-speaking country in the Americas, although sometimes usage includes citizens of Spain itself. Race is not a factor in whether someone is Hispanic. As such, examining a body would not reveal whether or not someone is a part of that culture.

The best Forever fanfic I've read! Characters were spot on, story had quick pace, but not too quick, just the right amount. And what's more important - this is exactly how I imagined the story would go on (well, few different details here and there, and of course I didn't really bother with thinking about case or something...) but yeah, the basics were the same and I absolutely loved it! So now it's half past 3am, my head kinda hurts, but I just had to read it in one go...
What I also love were all the details, you wrote the story as canon as possible but also added your own stuff which never seemed out of place. Good job on that. Also liked the bit about that one of the most horrific deaths of Henry's, not really nice to imagine but it fits his character, now all I'm thinking about is all kinds of horrific deaths he could've suffered... And I very much loved how the story got darker towards the very end, nice change of atmosphere. Actually the list of things I liked about this story is close to infinite and I could keep writing all night of course, but let's just say that this is simply the perfect fanfiction and one every Forever fan should read should they ever want to find out how the story could possibly go on... Thank you very much for sharing it :)

Finfic you know what that is it's two characters from the same movie that are put together by the fans such given the name fanfic

I loved the story all the way through.

You left me wanting more. Good job, mate.

Good reading :)

Thx

From every post-canon story I read, yours is right now the most believable. In your story Jo doesn't just accept or don't accept it. She is insecure, doesn't know to react to all of this. And her confused feelings mixed with an interesting mord case was really one hell of a fanfiction. You have my gratitude for posting this story.

Lmao I wasn't even gonna comment coz I'm so drunk in sleep but the last paragraph cracked me up!
Your writing is delicious! (Except for the severed bodies, I truly dislike that!)

Rock on!

Great story! I enjoyed it! I'm not sure if you are aware, but chapters 6 and 7 are exactly the same as chapters 10 and 11. It was quite confusing reading 6 and 7, then jumping back in time to 8 and 9, then repeating the information in 6 and 7 with 10 and 11. I enjoyed the journey though.

Wonderful! Excellent conclusion to this story. Yeah, you definitely had me fooled. Having Henry properly introduce Jo to Adam was genius. I love how you described Adam's eyes and in his own way was probably trying to say to Henry that he was just like him... and Henry could never be like Adam. Even if he did live for 2000 years.

Like Jo said, he's a good man - and he always will be one. I loved it! Great job! I look forward to more Forever stories from you in the future. :D

Phew. No more dying. Thank you.

I loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it.

A hitch hikers quote :). Great story, great ending

Great story, thank you so much for writing your heart out into it! I look forward to your next epic/short story/ whatever comes up!

This shows that Henry is by no means vindictive just protective to a fault and like Jo said, he is a good man.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.