Reviews for Just a Check-up |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hot damn. very sexy! thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() In your writing I noticed an error you had painfully pleasurably now when doing this the word after does not have the y like painfully pleasurable this sounds a lot more natural. I hope I could help. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lemony goodness... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! Too hot for the human eye! Good thing I wear glasses! Hahaha, lovely story dear and love the smut! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was hot ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha lemony...loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." Please remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature from this story if you want it on this site. Try to upload it to a site where the "Fiction MA" content is allowed like AdultFanfiction or Archive Of Our Own. |