Reviews for Won't You Burn for Me
Zero.g chapter 1 . 8/11
Cute~~
lala32903 chapter 1 . 6/21/2019
The title implies smooth suave drama and then thre first line is just kaito setting himself on fire this is great
Sakura521 chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
Oh my gosh that was so adorable and cute and fluff and sweet and I died
I love it 3
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 3/9/2019
Okay, I want to know how Shinichi propose to him in the middle of Heist. And Whyyy?

But anyway, I LOVE Pining in Denial Kaito so much!
He's in Denial and also he's so In Love that his POV barely shown his denial. Lol
Oh That was Adorable!
Thrushsong k'Varis chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
OMG I want to see the proposal!
de junco chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
So much fluff. Too much fluff. My heart is filling with fluff. Soon it will cease to function unless I get a shot of pure angst straight to the heart. I can't even begin to name what's cute in here, because everything fucking is. How is that even possible? My favourite mental image to giggle at now is Kaito failing miserably when aiming his forkful of waffles and just having a slack open mouth and maple syrup or whatever smeared on his face because he's so busy mooning over Shinichi's stupidly cute face. Thanks for writing!
SeventhAssassin chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
Please create a sequel, I want to see how Shinichi will propose to Kid in the middle of his heist. Good job by the way.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
*cackles*
A mid-heist proposal sounds entertaining and possibly awkward- after all, people aren't supposed to know THE Kaitou KID's civilian identity. KID proposing mid-heist people can laugh off (or fuel fantasies), his favorite detective? Not so much. Making KID fall off his perch (minus the fire this time, because Shinichi wouldn't want his thief burnt and would hopefully be deliberate enough to time things appropriately) might be a fun Wedding present to the Task Force, though.
Hell, propose during one of their little private encounters on the roof (or whichever exit route Shinichi deduced faster than anyone else) and let the Task Force and other detectives choke at seeing KID fall off a building. XD
Or mid-heist, while running, and get KIDnapped~! XD
GoddessOfSweetness-Me chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
Ok i was super happy with this fic and then you mentioned the proposal and my brain fizzled out and i died wow
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
Your stories always make me smile. They are so cute any warm
Wragziez chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
Fluff galore. I approve.
ilko chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
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bury me with all my electronics because i am also dead from cute ;A;
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
Aaaawww
Hiksi chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
AHHH I WANNA SEE THE PROPOSAL
BUT THIS IS SO CUTE. Kaito just being generally unable to function normally and Shinichi being all smiles and stuff and oh my god this is perfect why do you do this to me
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
I burst into laughter trying to imagine how proposing during a heist would actually work, especially with Shinichi-the-detective being the one to do it.
KID proposing could be considered a prank to other people if it happened the right way, especially if they don't see Shinichi saying "Yes" or any kissing. (Because Secret Identities are Secrets.)
Hell, KID could turn Shinichi into a bride, the Task Force into bridesmaids and groomsmen, and Nakamori into the priest or a mother-of-the-bride/groom (because it would be more fun than the Father despite certain appropriateness, though if Hakuba and Hattori -mother's of the bride and groom, respectively maybe?- or Hakuba and Aoko -priest and mother of the groom?- were there... XD ) with himself as the ostensible Groom, and the only people batting an eye for more than amusing pictures are the fans who'd speculate and ship them. XD

But Shinichi proposing mid-heist? That would either be a sudden discreet whisper that may result in him getting stolen with the target, or something very amusing and impressive and possibly hard to explain to anyone who knows Kaito and doesn't believe he's KID.
Though given that it seems to be perfectly expect-able that KID will fall off of something and injure himself in reaction, Shinichi could probably shout it for the entire Task Force to hear, and they'll just agree it's an effective tactic even if it won't work/shouldn't try it again. The fans would be pissed at him, though, thinking that's true and hating him for playing with "KID-sama's" heart. XD

Hakuba's reaction might be just as amusing as KID's, if he still believes Kaito is KID and knew they were dating. Disbelief that Kudou would actually do that in public to KID instead of Kaito, for one, and spluttering shock and amusement over KID's reaction, for another. Exasperation because he can sort of believe that really just happened, knowing them both as he does, particularly during heists. *cackles* I could see Hattori falling over spluttering, with added hysterical laughter if he knows about the Kaito-KID connection and that they've been dating.
If Nakamori had been told properly that Kaito is KID because of reasons like in your other one-shot, in which the Kaito/KID dilemma make it appear that Shinichi is a cheating bastard, before the proposal... He'd probably be facepalming afterward and scolding Shinichi for his timing, because Kaito hurt himself and could have been hurt a lot worse, before hugging them both in fatherly congratulations. XD
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