Reviews for An Unexpected Return
RoselineGift chapter 1 . 2/17/2019
Love it!
loggeroftacocat chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
This only fuels my hatred of Chrom.
DannyPhantom619 chapter 1 . 4/9/2018
It was a bit bittersweet but I loved it.
ChameleonGiant chapter 1 . 11/23/2017
Shoot I cried a lot after reading this. This is one of thoes heart wrenching scenarios that just couldn't not end with all kinds of suck even if you wanted it too. A beloved one thought dead for years suddenly comes back only to find everything isn't as he left it? Harsh.

Haha it's nice to see Cordelia again. The whole backstory between her and Chrom's relationship was pretty interesting and very sad. But you did manage to end it on a happier not with future Severra reuniting with Robin. Overall it was a wonderful bittersweet piece to read. That's pretty cool that the idea came to you in a dream. I wish I had some of mine play out as well and vividly as this. All mine are either cringey or weird and when they are worth noting I can never properly remember them. It bites having that lingering feeling that tells me it was the coolest dream and I can't recall it to save my life XD

Haha thanks for sharing!
Darkjackal248 chapter 1 . 10/27/2017
I loved this. This is probably one of the few stories that actually be beautiful in its own right. The plot was perfect and explain how robin and several gets to the kingdom of nohr, about his love lif, Etc. Etc.
You also handled the characters so well, I felt like the story was an official story. We'll done. We'll done!
DoomMarine55 chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
I liked this story. It was bittersweet but it didn't bash Chrom and Cordelia. To the people whining about them in the comments section, grow up. They were two people who were hurting and found love in each other again. They didn't do it to hurt Robin and he would never be selfish enough to make Cordelia be alone forever on the off chance that he'll COME BACK FROM THE DEAD. The heart wants what the heart wants.
Steph chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Man this brought me to tears. I wasn't expecting something like this. Good story. A lot of my ideas come from dreams too. Nice to know I'm not the only one who makes stories out of them.
Sugouxxx chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
For Hydra! This one shoot very depressing, this is make me gave a reason to more hate Chrom, and maybe cordelia, well this is very tragic, a hero sacrifice him self, wake up, and see her wife is "stolen" from her closer friend, well i hope robin is go to Invisible Kingdom, Make himself become vessel of hydra, and destroy everything in ylisse, muahahahahaha...i'm serious. Oh btw, need revengen from robin himself tho to both of them
Trankenstein chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Every time. Every single time I read this that scene with Severa sleeping gets me. Well done.
RandomAdventures chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
AWESOME!
Just, really good! I like it! The fact that Robin doesn't yell or show much emotion around Chrom and Cordelia shows his self-control with the two, even if I think it's a messed-up.
Five years seems like a long time though...
Oh yeah! The fact that Robin says everything calmly around Chrom and Cordelia is really good! Man, I wish I had this level of writing.
I was expecting Anna to go with Robin over Severa, though...
Eh, whatever! Still a solid fanfiction, that I like!
Sean Sword tactician chapter 1 . 6/4/2015
You prick! You made me cry! Damn you to hades!
Taliozo chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
Great story. Made me feel all the feels ;-;
lovewrath chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
The scene with sleeping Severa actually brought a tear to my eye. Reading this made me sad because Cordelia is my mother character. All in all great story.
some human chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
This killed me. Loved it.
X chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Well that sucked and Chrom is fucking pathetic he doesn't want Cordelia when she's single but the second her husband dies he's all over her?
Disgusting.
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