| Reviews for A Love Story |
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   SerasTasha chapter 1 . 2/13/2016 "Natsuki is special." I was like yes your special little girl ofc ofc "I know you're special." ofc she's special damnit look at her 5 years later... little brunette girl Natsumi... me: wait a minuteeeeeeeeeee you mean THAT special? took me too long to figure out, I remember this monologue in my head while I was reading this xD |
| GabbyGabrielle chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 Really nice |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2015 I really love it when Shizuru loves Natsuki first, than Natsuki loves Shizuru first...for me, it is lovely...like in anime... :) |
| bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 5/30/2015 Its actually a very nice story but i felt that things were rushed. Such as Natsuki and Saeko's reunion. The last part does not hace any explanation what happened at all and how they are together again. Also putiing a bit of background qould have been better. Like when Shizuru said that she's looking for this woman who cooked this food for her when she was little. I think that Saeko would have been able to recognize her right? In any case thisnis a wonderful story with its own quirks. Hoping to see more from you in the future. |
| malware101 chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 really great story, i wonder what happened to reito when shizuru found out his conversation with natsuki, how they meet again and their marriage? haha, but all in all its amazing. thank you author-san! :) |
| ImYourFan chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 WOnderful...BravoBravo... I love your style of writing... frankly and not too much drama... Mai-Hime fanfic needs more writers like you... two thumbs up for you author-san! Lately I like Futa stories in this fanfic...For me it is interesting :) Thank you for sharing this story... Anyway, please update your other stories too... I like your stories even though it is not FUTA... |
| Chum chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 Sweet...I like it. Thank for sharing this story. |
| pinkie chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 Only you is the title of the korean drama series :) |
| yen-kun chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 Nice story ...thank you |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 Only you is the title that youre looking for. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 This is a really sweet love story. I like the way you write it but you often switch between past tense and present. It would be better if you use only one for sentences which aren't "speaking". One more thing, it's a pity you didn't elaborate more about what happened at the station, after Natsuki made her decision and "5 years later". We know her final action but you could write, for example, as little flashback the missing part. Anyway, it's a great story. Thanks a lot for sharing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 Love it so much |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 Hey, it is mean Natsuki's futa here? Cute natsumi-chan...hehe... More longer lol... did Shizuru catch up with Natsuki at station before Natsuki rides the train? Shizuru needs to clear the air between them, right? Damn Reito-bastard for ruining their love.. Anyway, Is natsumi-chan as their loves product after that night? Lol... I like this one shot! Good job author-san... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2015 What a lovely story! (n_n) |
| JuNo chapter 1 . 5/11/2015 Wonderful story.. I love it! Update your other stories please...I like those too... |
