PLEASE UPLOAD! I LOVE THIS! IT'S SOOO EMOTIONAL!

A good story so far, keep up the good work.

Just read this story and I LOVE IT. I’m not sure if you’ll see this but Natsu is so relatable in this story and I think you did a wonderful job. Chin up, and smile!

NO DONT LEAVE IT LIKE THIS

"YOU LOOK SO MUCH BETTER WHEN YOU, WOAH OH OH!"

Pls make more it’s nice to have a story where you can truly relate to the main characters this is one of the first I’ve found so please keep up the good work and continue making the story.

I COMPLETEY AGREE PEOPLE NEED TO START MAKING MORE BETRAYED NATSU FANFICS! I mean their are TONS upon tons of LUCY feeling bad fanfics but barely any natsus

Please continue, I feel like this has to be closed off in some way, unless you don't wanna, do what you want

Please continue

AWESOME! WENDY'S HUGGING ME!

Pleas make more chapters , i really love your story

Hurry up and update please

I love this story... I too was someone who was slowly slipping away, but one day someone caught me and wouldn't let go. May she Rest In Peace.

This story is very good and really connects with some of the feelings I've experienced. I really hope the people who are unfairly judging this story realize that people's feelings can be hurt by hateful comments.
Please keep updating! 3

I AGREE WITH YOU SO MUCH. PEOPLE ARE HORRIBLE. THEY DONT KNOW THAT AUTHORS HAVE FEELINGS TOO AND THAT THEY POUR OUT SOME OF THEM IN THEIR STORIES.

PLEASE DONT LISTEN TO PEOPLE LIKE THAT– THEY SHOULD JUST STOP READING IF THEY ARE GONNA BE SUCH AN ASSHOLE.

YOUR STORY IS AMAZING. PLEASE DONT END IT. PLEASE DONT BE LIKE ME.

I WRITE STORIES IN WATTPAD AND I GOT INTO A FIGHT WITH A FRIEND I TRUSTED AND IT JUST SHATTERED EVERYTHING. I STARTED LOSING CONFIDENCE AND STARTED GETTING REALLY SELF CONSCIOUS THEN I STOPPED ONE OF MY STORIES.

PLEASE DONT BE LIKE ME. YOU ARE AMAZING. YOUR STORY IS BEAUTIFUL.

PLEASE DONT LET OTHER PEOPLE SAY THE OPPOSITE OF THAT

I WILL SUPPORT YOU.