This story is really getting along. I love it! I just have a few notes. First of all, I love how you've added in Zelena, that was a nice touch. Second, Tinker Bell is a lesbian? I know it's trying to add syndicalism into fairy tales, but remember; in Opperation Mongoose, there weren't just adults enjoying Heroes and Billains,mouth children too. It's meant to be family-friendly. I understand that young children don't read this fanfic, and that lesbians and gays are a part of the world and there is nothing that can change this (my adoptive parents happen to be two men), but children do have a hard time understanding this concept.
That is the only thing I don't like about this fanfic, it is awesome! I will still continue to read it, and I make another comment.

Nice.

I very much regretted that we only got two hours in the Bizarro EF, when it could have supported a whole season. This should really help.

Nice.

This looks awsome! I was thinking while I was watching the finale that I would love to read Isaac's book if it existed. And now you're writing a version of it! This is going to be great! Can't wait to read the rest!:)

I think this is gonna be a great show.

You are a genius!

Smart way to start the story!

Please continue.

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