Well I finally finished this part of the Obsession marathon.

I have a challenge for you: Do a 'find all' for the word 'mentioned' in this story. I found it used 19 different times, sometimes within 'Said' is an invisible word. I know it can sound boring to use 'he/she said', but honestly 90% of those words describing who is talking really should be 'said'. Using 'mentioned' instead is EXTREMELY distracting. Especially because they don't mean the same thing at all. There's overlap, but they are not the same. When someone mentions something, it's in passing. An extra thought that might clarify an idea but usually doesn't pertain to the actual main thought. While 'said' means that someone spoke, and is often the main point and idea.

Jesus fuck, this just went straight into cosmic horror.

That nekron vs league HAD to be inspired by the Sea King Arc from OPM, save this time there was no Saitama to bail them iut.

On a lighter note, Madam Rogue is a voyeur, considering she literally sat there and listened to Vision and Vlad go at it just to know when they were done before she went ahead. That was pretty funny in hindsight.

Glad that the DP&YJ book series is still going strong

Omg when will next book be updated. Are you still working on it ? This series wow you make us feel a whirlwind of emotions you hook up so strongly there is a craving a desperation for this next book desperation. I saw so far only 7 chapters. Please say u are still updating it and working on it ?

Have u published ur own books yet ? Do u have a website I’d loveeee to see ur worku are the most incredible author.

You are tearing my heart apart what amazing writing. Very full on. You’ve thought of everything

8 chapters in and bawling my eyes out. Omg your writing is amazing. Ur imagination. And ur story plot is just. Wow. Omg the tears wont stop

Gosh u seriously are an amazing author. Loving this book so much

Wasn’t Danny’s /Phantoms secret identity leaked in obsession (second book? Yet in this one it acts like it’s a secret identity again ?

Dude your an awesome writer, but sometimes you kick me right where it hurts rip cujo

Someone should hire you to make this into a animation, right now your ninja onions are getting to me

Still crying

I am literally crying. . . WHY DID I HAVE TO GET SO ATTACHED TO THIS SERIES!?

It here!

I'm so happy. Sure, they're will be some waiting periods for each update, but that okay. I can wait Once a Month for a update!

Our Desperation:

Man they're a lot of things going on. Danny is DEAD! Doubtful on that part. Danielle hates being a Superhero and seems to be developing in a dark character. It seems that Joel is falling into despair and yet seems to push forward for some king hope where they're is no hope. It seems that Luna Fenton/Legacy has taken over the narration of the foreshadowing of the story. We have Alien after Alien Invasions coming to planet Earth. Most like Luna Fenton/Legacy will appear soon and CHANGE events on Earth. How? With Earth not being complete wreck. Most likely a livable planet, but still they're going to be destruction and challenges along the way.

I'm so happy!

Expect at least two reviews for "Desperation". Maybe three. I'm trying to improve as a reviewer and keep up with the joy of this story!

It almost over and now we are entering FAN FICTION territory where you make events happen your own way. Not following "Danny Phantom" or "Young Justice" Cartoon series anymore.

Still, they're a lot from "DC" Universe you can take for some events and Alien Invasions to come.