wtf? is her father a part blood hound? u could have introduced her father in several more believable ways, but u picked "I smell a mans scent mixed in with my daughters via this letter".

Ruby x jaune is called Lancaster is because of the war of the roses
The war was fought between the house of lancasters and the house of York
The house of York's emblem is a white rose
Weiss x ruby is called white rose
Jaune x ruby is the main contender to weiss x ruby
So that's why ruby x jaune is called Lancaster

Awwww I find that cute June and ruby as a couple and as husband and wife

Anyone else realize their watching iron man 2 in chapter 2. Evil robots, a man in a suit of armor and 2 trained government agents.

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Red vs Blue
Red vs Blue.

RED VS BLUEEEEEEEEE

I thought Ruby would be more angry at Yang...She almost killed the man!

If only the rifle part was a direct quote from the show instead you used "high caliber sniper rifle" and made it sound dumbTis a shame

red vs blue i see what you did there

Jesus loves you and thinks your amazing and will help you and come into your life if you ask and repent out loud, I love you buddy you're amazing and a winner WinnerHug

you all should watch Todd White's testimony, normal Todd White or Heidi Baker, Jesse Duplantis.

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Awww cute

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Anyway, the third chapter of Yang nearly killing Jaune was way too OOC for her, and the fact that her punishment was just suspension is just absurd. And then you have the odasity to brush it off on chapter 4 by saying "How are you not focused on the confession?"

That is poor and lazy writing. However, I am still going to read this due to it being good on the fluff. I am hoping the writing improves.

TwT Hermoso

I don't think "illiterate" is the right word hahahaha. I think you mean reiterate.

She needs some milk