I love your main stories In Time of Peace and The Valley of the End, they are amazing! Some of your one shots are great too. I am not sure how I feel about this one though. It’s set in a very Hollywood movie style :-) I do understand that it must be hard for her to wait but I can’t see her cheating on Sasuke ... with Naruto of everyone. She’s not stupid to destroy her friendship with both Naruto and Sasuke. Especially if they were starting an intimate relationship when Sasuke left... Sakura is stronger than that. But parts of me feel that it’s right she’s tried different experiences - 3 years is a lot to wait for your partner... I actually feel it’s unrealistic how in the real story she’s waited ten years and there isn’t anywhere (gaiden, shinden, etc) where they explain how they both did it... it feels like she had zero news during that time, she forgot if he was wearing glasses (when Sarada asks) and all this feels stupid to me! I don’t like how they wrote their story - I understand the whole traveling through universes but why not travel back home to rest - surely Sasuke didn’t get “leads” during ten years or else he’s not very efficient! And don’t get me started on the whole Boruto thing! Anyway!
Coming back to your story, I feel you should have written a longer version and left it to desire for other men rather than actually have her sleep with Naruto. And Naruto isn’t stupid enough to believe she’s over Sasuke... it was a good idea to explore but not as well executed as your other stories! Sorry

Noice.

Omg plz continue this I wanna know how it goes! Plus I’m sad that things turned out this way for naruto. I don’t believe that Sakura would actually do that to naruto but for the sake of this story I understand. Also sasuke is a gigantic asshole for not replying he deserves it and I hate that he somehow how demands that she wait. Like he doesn’t know how painful it is for her. It’s like he’s asking her not to scream while he repeatedly stabs her. He's really selfish and has not learned a thing. But I understand for the sake of this story. I just hope Sakura ends up happy and naruto as well and for sasuke to man the fuck up.

It was good! Lol I’m all hoping for SasuSakunaru :3

I enjoy your story because it's not another simplistic one, filled with sweet, but still naive views on love, attraction and relationships. The kind of toxic triangle that Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke find themselves in is fresh and realistic. I hope that you return and finish this this plot. Cheers!

Thank you for sharing this chapter of the story, I'm sorry that someone was rude to you, I feel like on a fan based website that is pretty un called for. One of the things i like about reading sasusaku fan fics is that every writer brings something a little different to the way Sasuke is written because we don't really get to see that side of him in the manga - especially in his relationship with Sakura, with only small snippets in Boruto really. So much of their canon relationship is assumed, like that Sarada exists, we can assume that they've been spent a night together etc. etc. I LOVE how you portray him, in this story and every fic you've written, i feel like you nail him as a character while ALSO showing us the sides of him that readers looking for sasusaku stories are obviously looking to read. I am a huge fan of your writing

I understand it may be difficult finding inspiration to finish a story you've last worked on 3 years ago. And i've read in your authors notes that its not received well by some. I hope i'm not over stepping as that's not at all my intention, but if you're ever looking for a sign, an incentive, a push, or something to continue this story please let this comment be it. Ultimately its up to you to decide when or if you'll continue this story but as someone who is a fan of all your naruto works and as someone who has spent a long time searching for the right narusaku/sasusaku fic and found it here, it would bring me so much joy and satisfaction to see how it completes.

Like i said, its ultimately up to you, but i'll always come back no matter how long it takes (wow overly dramatic much).

Thanks for writing such beautiful stories. 3

Wow, this is so sad! I guess I don't know how I would feel in Sakura's situation, but I'd be so pissed at Sasuke for all his crap. I don't think it's quite fair what Sakura is doing to Naruto (because she IS kinda using him to get over Sasuke), but honestly I'm proud of her for letting go of Sasuke. Did he seriously expect her to just wait? What a selfish, entitled bastard! Ugh, it's all just kinda a mess though isn't it?

Thank you for sharing this story. Like all your work I've partaken in, it's phenomenally written, and poignant beyond belief. This is much more realistic of what I imagine Sakura must have been feeling and does better justice to the topic than canon does IMHO. Don't pay any mind to shipping war haters; regardless of whether one supports or hates the ships (this one makes me root for NaruSaku in my heart of hearts, honestly), one can't fault your skills at tugging at heartstrings and igniting the imagination with your words.

i'm so sad that this piece was never finished because I love your writing and this story is totally different, absorbing and much more interesting than typical sasuke housecoming. :C
If you ever could continue...

Although I only see Sakura and Naruto as best friends, I cant help but love this story, and the way you portrait the feelings of the three of them! You are a very skillful writer, really. Cant wait for more!

This is so good! Please continueee! Cant wait for you to update all your naruto's stories!

Sakura betrayed the love of her life, the man she claimed she loves...
Naruto betrayed his best friend and their friendship...
It seems Sasuke is the one one faithfull here, in love and friendship...

I see it again and I still can't understand how so many make Naruto such a sensitive and sweet guy, when he will be the first to be in Sakura's apartment if he wouldn't be scared of her punch...
And Sakura, who has all her friends with her, as oppose to Sasuke who is alone in that big world, can't wait for the man she loves, even after he promised he will come back?

Sakura betrayed the man she says she loves...
Naruto betrayed his friend...
It seems the only faithfull one is Sasuke, in love and friendship...