This is a HELL of a story! I just spent the past week re-reading it, since the updates were hiding wayyy back in my inbox. I remember loving this story when I first read it years ago and I enjoy it just as much now! You are a skilled writer and your ability to create your own storyline while drawing and creating parallels to the canon story is amazing. I recently started re-watching Death Note and I'm slowly getting back into the fandom, but I can honestly say this has reached out and pulled me in. It's truly captivating and I find so much joy in the imperfections of each character which you highlight so well - that's one of the great things about Death Note, after all, and you put the words in L's mouth a couple chapters back to express this notion quite perfectly.

I don't know if you'll even read this, considering it has been quite a few years since this was updated. If you ever chose to pick this back up again, you have an avid reader in me and I would even love to offer myself as a beta for this story. I need to refresh my Death Note knowledge, but I'd be more than willing to do so. Your writing style is so interesting to me and your strengths in characterization and word choice are a pleasure to read. I know life has taken a wild turn for most everyone at this point and I hope you are doing well. Even if it's not this story, I hope you keep writing because you have a true creative talent.

Favorite chapter only because of Sachiko. Such a wonderful, caring, amazing person for doing what Light had always wanted since he found out.

Poor Naomi, having to deal with three drunk people.

That scene sHoOkEd me. I'm actually a little spooked right now, by this new Kira. I was really worried they were going to make the guards shoot at the crowd or something (what a relief). I did find the interactions between hipster L & Light cute though! And good ol' Light had to show his tough love for Ryuzaki through his infamous punches. Definitely (not) cute XD
This new Kira seems interesting... I can't place my finger on who it is though. More of a poet? Love for Misa? It could be that other Kira guy from the anime although I haven't watched the show or read the manga for years so I don't remember much about the side characters oof

lol Why do I have a feeling that Light could still be Kira. I tried thinking maybe he set the killings ahead of time as he did in the anime, but I was like nahh, there's no way. People always write off as Misa being overly annoying and obnoxious, I love how that you made her have more to her than being dumb and pretty! I also like the mini friendship she has going on with L, that was pretty cute.

I'm pretty new to the Omegaverse stuff/world. My ignorant self was expecting werewolves, which is why I would always avoid stories that had this as their AU (sorry if that's yours/someone's thing, no hate it is just not for me!). I'm also genuinely surprised as to how well thought out and developed this type of world is. I find the content interesting and pretty informative!
I lowkey feel like I'm learning a lot even though it's just an AU lol I really loved your first story which is why I gave this story a shot despite my initial hesitations, but now I have 0 regrets. I'm already in love with this

still reading this story!

I absolutely adore this fic! I really want to know what happens next! I've reread so many times, I've been theorizing what could happen. Is Light's cover blown? Was the suicide bomber a part of Hideki Ryuga's plan to isolate Light? Why else would they have a jet ready to launch before L' s team can arrive? What role does Namikawa play with the kiras? Will Misa accidentally expose Light's omega status? Is Kiyomi attracted to only omegas? Are they going to try to get Light on their side by making him a kira? Is Beyond going to make a sudden appearance on the plane? Are Naomi and Matsuda finally gonna make their relationship official? OMG I'm just filled with so much anticipation, but I'll wait forever if I had to! Just tooooooooo good!

Hey! This story is so well written! The plot is unique, engaging, and we'll thought out! I really hope to see a new chapter soon!

This chapter was so good wow. Kira totally fucked up my shit haha I was not expecting that and actually felt fear and dread! Amazing writing xx

I am loving this fic! I'm reading it for the first time and by reading the reviews first I know you haven't updated, but I figured reviewing wouldn't hurt.
I've tried to read a lot of omegaverse fics before, but this is the only one I have gotten into. I love that you don't make it a huge deal, and the characters and the kira case is more important. It's written what it would be like if death note was in an omegaverse, but it's not the focus, which I love.
Secondly, I think you're characterization is fantastic, especially woth Light. I think you're pretty spot on, nuff said.
Talking about characterization, I love the way you wrote Misa. She's so cute and I hope there's more of her to come! xx

When will the next chapter be out! Great fic! Can’t wait tbh.

Such an interesting plot, very well developed!

please please please update. best Death Note Fanfiction ever.

This is honestly my favourite Death Note fanfiction, I've read it like 10 times!
It's so good, so clever, I have so many theories as to what could be happening. I so wish this fic would update, it go left on such a huge cliffhanger and I don't think my heart can take it.