well if the new version is released is in this fic like the last rewrite make sure to delete the old comments to get new ones if it is a new fic tell when it is up

this fic has died a lot lols well next time
i didn't really see an issue besides the lame office intern job and no moving into the inn the harem was seemingly going great

So basically we won’t see another update.

RP

I’m glad your still updating and not abandoning this like so many do to their stories.

RP

I m not saying you need to make then longer it just help that's all. That or update more frequently cuz from all the sekeri fic I ve read so far this take is completely new. That's why I want longer chapter/update more often. Is cuz you done something no one else has done, aleast as far as I read. That and you got me hooked on this fic so kudos for that. Anyways keep up the great work. I'll be following this little gem of a fic as you keep updating it.

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I have to say that over time the story gets kind of confused. There is no progress to the actual content of the story even after 6 chapters.

Sometimes I have to read the story several times and still don't understand what really happens or why. Is it a dream now? Or really?

Who's unknown? Is it Matsu?

Yay Miya! She's one of my personal favorites, along with Karasuba, Kazehana and Uzume. There's a serious lack of decent Sekirei fics, much less one with all my favorites with the same Ashikabi. Honestly, I didn't like Minato much as he's like the typical harem protag, quite useless.
Anyway, I hope he's better here than in canon

Don't do me dirty like that man. I don't even get what's happening anymore, but you can't just leave me hanging. And as sad as it is because I know my wish won't come true but don't do the sekirei dirty like that either. They already got a shit hand. Don't be cruel about it.

Brah I need more you know how hard it is to find a sekirei fic that update somewhat consistently. Is miya going to be in the harem? If not that fine I got my favorite wafiu 04 to keep me happy. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of I m down. I always have tons of ideas for fics. Just don't ask me to spell cuz I have dyslexia lol. Anyways love the new chapter since not many authors show how 07 escape. Was a nice touch of detail. Just wish the chapter were longer but I can't complain about that since I m not writing it.

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Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon

so is waifu broken or was she luckily unbroken by proper fate

you know canon im surprised the older ones let this shit happen but sadly#0/1 was stupid huh

This is a weird and creepy chapter.

so sad

Must have more asap