I read about your story on the TV tropes fanficrec page for Cross Ange so I thought I'd check it out.
I have to be honest, I don't much agree with your decision to have Hilda's mother pretend to hate her just so Lelouch's hypno suggestion would make Hilda kill her. Aside from being a crucial part of her character arc in the series, even for Lelouche it's kind of a dick move and makes it difficult for me to sympathize with him.

In any case, if you're still a fan of Cross Ange, I'd like to invite you to take look at my own long fic, The Knight of Hilda. It's basically a deconstruction of what would happen if there was an underground pro-Norma sympathist movement among the Mana users.

Good keep it up but don't take long to update

Lost all interest with Suzaku. Also, Suzaku actually has an important role in being Zero and looking after Nunnally, i doubt Lulu would take him from that.

Finally what in the world did you take so long to update ? Three freaking months for heaven's sake, but i'm just glad to known that you will continue till the end

One month now, one month since your last update, don't forget about us and update

Another chapter, a little short but it will do. We hope that you'll update soon. See ya and continue your good job.

I think it is beautiful that Sylvia is finally reunited with her sister after she was away

Almost to the end

can't blame him for saying that, much less Sylvia either. dead or not they are kids and its not easy...but even so, they shouldn't be used like that.

Its not just Syliva who can accept it, the other mana allies probably can too. especially if it'll help them fight their enemies better.

I wonder who Ange will tell off when she crashes into the castle since Sylvia's on her side...her former friends,

I wonder if Julio's being brain controlled in this au. like someone other than embryo managed to use his insecurities to corrupt him and use his body as a host so he can control the world of mana easier. makes sense especially if Julio and Ange and Sylvia are sibs, and Julio got this powers. at least that's what I suspect.

awesome story btw.

Yo it me again just to let you known that i'm waiting your update the end is near and i want to see it good luck and see ya

Finally Finally i through you give up glad to that i'm wrong can't wait to see what you have for us next time

This is a good chapter just a few more and then it'll be over I am so excited to see how the ending goes and I hope Sylvia saves her sister from that evil goddess

It's been a long time for this story
Happy New Year buddy