Awe so sweet! Wonder who left it? Nice job with writing Luna, I find writing her to be quite the challenge, but you did it well. I like the be true to yourself, that was very nice. Great job with it, even if it was a bit short, it was very sweet.

This is a really cute story and I am now wondering who sent it to her. I hope it's Neville or Harry. The words 'be true to yourself' are perfect for Luna and it shows that her admirer truly appreciates her quirkiness and originality. I love how Luna seems to quite like being called Loony and is quite amused by it.

Nice little drabble. I felt it could have been a bit longer, but it worked just as well this way. It's always nice to read something so fluffy it could be cotton candy. )

How cute.

I liked how you began it with no one even noticing Luna leaving the commons despite how eccentric she is. It kind of goes to show that even weirdness can be normalized if it occurs enough.

It was cute that she got a chocolate bunny, does that mean it's easter? Or close to it, anyway? I'm rather curious to know who gave it to her, too, since only girls can get into the girl dorm...

Awwww :) This was sweet, and I can't help but wonder who sent it. Although the bunny's description was slightly confusing (I thought it was a stuffed animal, and then it was a chocolate bunny...), I like Luna's character in this.

I always wondered how exactly Luna thought, and why she viewed others' bullying as remotely friendly was beyond me. This fic gives me an idea of how she thinks. She likes the nickname Loony, if her grin is anything to go by. But she also appreciates genuinely nice gestures, such as the bunny. This fic has really given me new insight on Luna.

Most of your recent work was not in any fandom that I know, so I reviewed this one instead (Harry Potter, not rated M)

This is a sweet little story. I wanted to read something about Luna, having recently wrote about her. You built a captivating little scene, with her getting an unexpected present. Not that she needed it, by the way, I think, but it was nice nonetheless... I wonder who was the person to send that to her.

Light and sweet little story. Just like chocolate. Keep writing

This was a very nice introspective piece about Luna Lovegood - one of my favourite ladies in HP.

The use of candy and her was very well done because she's just so whimsical, like candy, and the bright colours just complement her eccentrics and such.

A Bunny? It must be Easter

Overall, this was a very nice piece.

-Ciao Mate

I absolutely love all the imagery here! I've read a couple other things you've written, and I've noticed that's something you excel at. This is so beautifully written, and I think you captured Luna perfectly here. I would love to know who gave her the chocolate!

Literally the only suggestion I could make for tis is that [what lied beneath it] I think should be [lay]. This was such a wonderful piece, it was so sweet and lovely to read. Great job :)

This is very sweet. You've captured Luna's sunny personality very nicely, and I like the imagery you've used to present the sweets. And who is this mysterious candy-giver? I hope it's Harry! :D Nicely done.

You capture Luna so perfectly here! I really like the word play of the sentence [That last one...the most creative.] It's a really nice juxtaposition, and it's just so much like how I imagine Luna would think or see the world!

[Colorful plastic covered a small figure] - OK, I'm really curious about what this is! I like the intrigue. However, the description is a little confusing, and I can't picture it. Do you mean that it's a plastic figure? With the way it's worded, I thought there was a figure and then there were colorful plastic things on top of the figure. I'm not sure which way you intended it.

[she peeled back the plastic] - Now I'm really confused. I'm not sure what you're describing here. You don't really peel back plastic unless it's like one of those clear, plastic sheets that covers food to keep it fresh or something. And the way it was described as a plastic-covered figure, for some reason I was thinking hard plastic. Maybe this is a regional difference? Here, we don't use plastic to cover anything. We might use foil or plastic wrap (which is see-through and different than plastic).

Oh my gosh, that bunny sounds so adorable and pretty and just *squee*. Someone needs to make me one of these now! I want one. I wouldn't be able to eat it, though, because it just sounds so perfect. I'd want to keep it forever.

Aww, we don't get to find out who sent it to her. D: That's a bit disappointing, since I was rather curious. I do love this, though, and I love the message on it! This was a cute drabble.

SPaG:
[With a grin she] - With a grin, she
[to the center to stop short] - I think this sentence would flow better if you added "only." "...to the center only to stop short."
[on her bed; yellow,] - colon instead of a semicolon (you only use a semicolon when what comes after it is an independent clause, which it's not here)
[Raising a finger she] - Raising a finger, she
[hard unlike] - hard, unlike
[plastic but there] - plastic, but
[words, be true to yourself, etched] - words 'be true to yourself' etched

This was really sweet. I wonder who left it for her! The words 'be true to yourself' fit her perfectly. Luna should always embrace her quirkiness! xx

This was really sweet. Though now you've made me curious as to who left her the chocolate bunny.

The detailed descriptions you use are wonderful. Everything from describing the yellow, pink and green wrapping to the little heart the bunny was holding was very well written. That's one thing I've noticed from reading your work is that you pay great attention to detail.

And those words, "be true to yourself", are just perfect. It's nice to know that someone in the castle likes her the way she is enough to give her something like that.

This was very cute!
It was short and sweet, just like a candy ;)
I really liked the way you characterized Luna, it felt really Luna-ish, if that makes any sense.
I like how the gift-giver is a mystery, it could be Dumbledore, or it could be someone in a more romantic capacity, it's up to the reader to decide.
Just a small suggestion- put the words "Be true to yourself" in quotes, so that they are highlighted.
Well done!

Hi there!

I like how you started the story with showing what other people think of Luna because it gives a good explanation for why no one follows behind her and why she's alone for the rest of the story.

You describe the wrapping and the chocolate bunny beautifully. Th imagery is really great.

Well done on this story. It was a pleasant read, and it leaves me with a mystery. Nice job! :)

Awww this was sweet. Your buildup to the big reveal was really nice. I almost thought she had gotten a real bunny and was a bit confused since the prompt was "candy". Good job with this lovely Luna drabble. I want to hope that it's Neville or Harry who got her this chocolate rabbit.