Reviews for An Unusual Competitor
anime-addict-fan chapter 3 . 5/13/2019
Please continue! Both this and "What can't be unseen" are awesome! Can't wait for you to update! I love how you write
Ruby Cider chapter 3 . 8/1/2018
this is magnificent! please tell me you'll continue it!
Hkcutiepie1352 chapter 3 . 3/10/2018
Please update. This fanfic is very good even with the 3 chapters
soulsborne123 chapter 3 . 2/3/2017
I hope you continue it!
Mangagirl1218 chapter 3 . 6/28/2016
This made me laugh a lot! Poor Naru, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Memo chapter 3 . 5/16/2016
Umm is the story supposed to repeat itself because if it is that's just mean
Emina105 chapter 3 . 5/17/2016
Ahhhh. This is so sweet.
The chapters are short, but with the way you write, this isn't a disadvantage.
Reading these 3 chapters made me feel very refreshed and happy, and i like how i didn't feel like it was cheesy [which cheesiness, to me, is bad] or repetitive with other stories that i've read before.
All around, i like this light hearted playfulness feel of the story
[though naru sure isn't feeling the lightheartedness in here heh]

thank you for your work :D
slvrphoenx chapter 3 . 5/17/2016
i love that Naru is jealous of his father taking care of Mai. i really like this story so far. can't wait for the next update.
D C JoKeR H S chapter 3 . 5/17/2016
;w; be glad, Naru-chan; Lin didn't open the door to see how wreaked you made your room XD
(beautifol XD)
Naruisawesome chapter 3 . 5/16/2016
Lol! Oh, Naru... XD A lot of things was repeated in this chapter though. You might wanna reread it for yourself to see.
Curlyfr13s chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
This is cute, I hope you update soon!
Rebecca chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
This is good XD I can't wait for more
celtyin chapter 2 . 8/1/2015
Giggles! Thanks for the update!
NaginiFay chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
Naru is jealous of his dad? Oh that is funny!
D C JoKeR H S chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
WAAH! GIVE NARU-CHAN HUGS!
GIVE MARTIN-SAN A SLAP! HE'S ALREADY GOT LU-LU-CHAN!
GIVE LU-LU-CHAN HUGS, TOO!
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