Reviews for An Unusual Competitor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! Both this and "What can't be unseen" are awesome! Can't wait for you to update! I love how you write |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is magnificent! please tell me you'll continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update. This fanfic is very good even with the 3 chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me laugh a lot! Poor Naru, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Umm is the story supposed to repeat itself because if it is that's just mean |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhh. This is so sweet. The chapters are short, but with the way you write, this isn't a disadvantage. Reading these 3 chapters made me feel very refreshed and happy, and i like how i didn't feel like it was cheesy [which cheesiness, to me, is bad] or repetitive with other stories that i've read before. All around, i like this light hearted playfulness feel of the story [though naru sure isn't feeling the lightheartedness in here heh] thank you for your work :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love that Naru is jealous of his father taking care of Mai. i really like this story so far. can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;w; be glad, Naru-chan; Lin didn't open the door to see how wreaked you made your room XD (beautifol XD) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! Oh, Naru... XD A lot of things was repeated in this chapter though. You might wanna reread it for yourself to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is cute, I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() This is good XD I can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Giggles! Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naru is jealous of his dad? Oh that is funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAAH! GIVE NARU-CHAN HUGS! GIVE MARTIN-SAN A SLAP! HE'S ALREADY GOT LU-LU-CHAN! GIVE LU-LU-CHAN HUGS, TOO! |