Sorry I meant they blew me as in mad lol

Well this story is not bad but too crazy for me I thought I never say this but Lucy cana and Mira were getting on my nerves they was doing to much other that great story but i'mma have to at chapter 12 jesus Christ them girls blow me lol

Oh man! So much happened this chapter! I absolutely loved it, I can honestly say that this is by far my favorite chapter in the series! The intensity of it all was jarring. Picturing the sunset and then the sky darkening into night foreshadowed the happenings between Gray and Erza.

It was a perfect balance between love and hate, hurt and comfort, as well as humor and soberity- the seriousness of the situation towards the end. It seems that the main problem between these two is the height of misunderstandings. But right now Gray is the one in the wrong. He has kissed her after she witnessed him kissing Juvia. He left her thinking that he loves Juvia so now that he has forcefully kissed her, she will probably think he is playing with her heart and she's left more heartbroken.

I want him to realize the possibility of Erza having caught him and Juvia- perhaps when he sullenly spills her rejection to Natsu and Lucy and Juvia tells them that she's sorry for kissing him, his friends will smack some sense into him and tell him "Idiot! That must be why she doesn't believe you when you tell her you love her!" Juvia would then realize and tell him that Hibiki had planned it and must have told Erza something to mess up Gray's relationship with her! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you manage to write up and post again soon! Good luck.

-Amns.

No not hard at all, i thought there's gonna be a lot more drama bc i thought hibiki would fight harder, but no, he just easily surrender and ran away... however good job... so cute

That'd what you deserved when you're too weak and too slow Gray...let him burn in jealousy the drama will be much better...

Yeah finally saviour in action as always he did for Erza :D i'm pump up

WOW Great

Gray, erza and hibiki i never get bored of them

I wish drama between them longer, their tension and words for each other always the fun scene

Well Erza not a stranger for bikini and swimsuit, she impossibly crazy about clothes shopping bc she is the reequip the, sure she love shopping and any clothes

I always love about this Hibiki and Gray drama but i just wish that hibiki got his plan a little secret like a bad guy usually does. Leave to mystery till the day has come

I like that drama scene between Gray and Hibiki. I like how you made Gray like that like he himself in fairy tail always there for Erza even when erza get into trouble

Just my opinion, i didn't meant to be mean but honestly, Lucy pigtails looks so like a dumb dumb girl, like she got mental illness LOL. Just saying

Take that Cana And Mira... that's all you hardly want to see right, so yeah ! Take that!

I got almost 100 of long tail cats, just that not one got sensitive when i play with the tail. Kitten love to play with their mother's tail made them jumping upside down left and right then rolling with their excited eyes which calming to watched