Why did Baelish become master of the coin? He is younger than king stark and has no work experience.

Where is the logic? Why didn't Ned tell Cersei the truth about John? Daenerys is in the castle, which means there's no point in keeping John's secret.

Who sent the man to kill Robb. I think it's either Jaime or Hoster Tully. But please give a hint to who sent him.

Buena historia espero que continúes con ella.
Solo una cosa no había necesidad que Jon sea un bastardo en tu historia, podría crecer como un pupilo.
Otra cosa seria que Cersei y Ned tuvieran hijos sin problemas.
Si decides rehacer tu historia creo que Net podría salvar a Ellai y su hija para que Ned pudiera tener mas motivos para calmar los 7 reinos. Sin olvidar que matar Ashara y su hija estaría mal en tu historia, podría ella y su hija crecer en la fortaleza roja sin problemas.
Creo que Ned debe tener un harén. Así como sus hijos y hijas tendrían una relación mas que hermanos.

Claiming Jon is a bastard is unnecessary due to the fact that Robert was the only reason he ever needed to claim Jon as such. Unless he wants Jon dead then Jon doesn’t really have anything to fear.

Bravo!

I dont understand why he would perpetuate the same lie when he is the king and no longer has to worry about Robert. In fact, it seems abundantly stupid.

I don't think he'll have to cover for Jon since he only did so in cannon because he feared Robert would try to kill Jon. Great fic by the way.

Its a shame there was no dialogue betweent cersei and catalyn

why the fuck will he pretend jon was a bastard. The only threat was Robert who died. If dany is in the castle then what's the problem with jon. Your this mistake and now I won't read

petyr baelish does not own them . He owned them later in the timeline

Please continue and make more chapters like 30 chapters bcuz people nowadays have like 50 or 30 or even 123!

I don't understand why he needs to make Jon a bastard, in fact, as King, he will have been better to declare him a Stark and nephew in his court than as a bastard. You shouldn't have follow canon so much in this instance. This is a fanfiction, try to make this story truly yours and not just an offshot or pale copy. Daenerys is a ward of the king, his nephew is less troublesome than her.

Really like this story. Usually I don't like to read stories where Jon isn't the main character but I like it so far with Ned and Cersei. Damn was looking forward to seeing the reactions of Jaime and Tywin. Until next time.

I hope you can continue this story...this is really good.