Reviews for All On His Own
ae2000x chapter 1 . 11/28/2019
I HAVE SO MAY FEELS OVER THIS
CeliaBlair24 chapter 1 . 11/18/2017
This may have been short, I may have been short but ... it hits deep. I will not lie, I sobbed my head out through the last several lines, because it's so heart breaking yet so true. Love is not earned, it is given but Zuko doesn't realize this. I don't think he has or will for a long while. Having a replay of this scene in Iroh's pov, I just... Lord I was lost to the world of years and I am STILL crying! Well done!
TinyFlyingFerret chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
The Bible verse perfectly fit this beautiful little glimpse into the wonderful relationship between these two characters. The raw emotion was very powerful and the writing itself was well done- keep it up!
Laser Lance 720 chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
This was an absolutely beautiful piece. Stunning in every way. The last two lines really did it for me. They were just so prefect and it really brought the piece together. A truly wonderful read.
Anon chapter 1 . 8/19/2016
Wonderful insight, thank you for posting!
Gelado Pocket-mouse chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
I love this!
Mashpotatoe Queen chapter 1 . 8/5/2016
Hello, eternal depression.
So long, all feelings that are even remotely like happiness.
This is truly beautiful, thank you for sharing it.
:)
JediKnightErrant chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
I love everything to do with Iroh and Zuko. Their story is equally frustrating tender heartbreaking and full of love.
BowStringPrincess chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
That was amazing and beautiful.
Shojobaby chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
This encapsulates all the reasons why Iroh is one of my favorite characters. You portrayed his emotion really well.

God bless you.
Fireflaked chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
oh my god im filled with feels
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
This was beautiful. You wrote Iroh perfectly. And I was pleasantly surprised to find a Bible verse at the end of this... I don't think I've seen someone do that before. Keep writing please.
Artifice31029 chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Wow! This was really heartwrenching, and very well written! I enjoyed it a lot. Excellent job!

~Evil
KittyKatly chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
OMG You made me cry. The way you wrote Iroh's POV was just beautiful!
Amme Mahtal chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
omg this was so good! Iroh's POV was so well written and the way you weaved his thoughts and the dialog together was really good. I liked how Iroh referred to Zuko as "his son" at the end omg the feels! Lol and the bible passage was perfect for this. Great job!