Espero el siguiente capítulo está historia está mejor hecha que la original

I love this book it is one of my favorite naruto books please keep up the good work, I will read this even if you make 10 books about it which I would love

I really do enjoy this story I can't wait for more. Hope all is well and you're staying safe.

Gosh I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens with Naruto and Midoshi

I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please keep up the incredible work.

Hi,

When will you be coming out with the new chapter?

I'm just loving this series keep up the good work. Read the first part and this in less than a day as I was enjoying it so much!

First I want to apologize for not reviewing this chapter yet as I've been trying to get back into writing and out of my funk. Hopefully I'll write something soon. Anyway I read this chapter again and all I can say is it was good. I liked how Kakashi owned Sasuke for being a punk and all I can say is after this Team 7 is going to be no more. I have a suggestion if you want to use it. You should have it were Sasuke is removed from the shinobi program for six months and is force to seek mental therapy though I doubt he will do it. Sai will be put on stand by incase of a new team or if someone is injured. I'm wondering if you will have Sai as a good guy or a bad guy in this? Just wondering. As for Sakura she should be sent back to the academy for reprimands. If not then you can have her removed from the shinobi force.

One other suggestion is that when Sasuke goes to leave for Orochimaru, have it were he takes Sakura with him for a bit, only to kill her later on when he and the Sound Four are a couple miles away from the village. This is just a suggestion so you know.

Anyway back to the chapter. It sucked that Sandayu and his group had died as I was hoping they would survive their encounter. Plus I remember from the movie Naruto didn't need to tap into the Kyuubi's chakra to out run the train as he did that on his own.

Hopefully Naruto and Koyuki can get out of this soon and meet up with Anko and the others. Plus it would be cool if this was a Naruto/Koyuki pairing as I've seen some when she is in a harem with Naruto.

Anyway this is getting good and I hope to see the fight between Team Anko against Doto and his group.

Good Luck Dragon6.

I look forward to the next chapter

I read this chapter again and it kicked ass! Sorry I didn't review it yet. Anyway I can see that Kakashi's squad is going to fail after this cluster fuck considering Sasuke and Sakura didn't follow orders and Sakura was even more uesless when an enemy shinobi walked past her in a henge jutsu. All I can say is Team Kakashi is dead and done.

Also Midoshi is planning to build her own group for what purpose I don't know, but I honestly hate her. Also I can't help but feel bad for Kakashi as he got the worst mission's when he was ANBU. I can't come up with a name for Midoshi's new attack move but I'm sure you'll think of something. This is getting good and I look forward to more.

Good Luck Dragon6.

Very interesting chapter!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

Is it strange that after this chapter alone I kinda wanna see Naruto end up paired with Koyuki?

Fantastic couple of chapters but damn did you really have to leave it there.

Great job and I really hope it wont be to long before the next one is out.

Until next time.

Wasn't sure if you were gonna save anyone or not. Of course, their deaths weigh on Koyuki even if she won't admit it.

Always the same with Sasuke and Sakura, it's always someone else's fault. Very curious about how the plan with Midoshi will work out.