| Reviews for We're the Cullens |
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   40ishpolishmom chapter 19 . 4/10 Hi, nice story, and I realize American English is not your main one so just to let you know the phrase is "put the book in the nightstand" or "put the phone on the nightstand", not "kept". That would be "I kept the phone in my pocket instead of putting it on the nightstand". And some sentences are missing small words here and there. It helps to read the spoken parts aloud and see if they make sense. I am not sure if you have an American English as first language beta reader but it may help with these little issues. |
| grapesiii chapter 40 . 3/25 I love this novel but I hate the character of seth. that was unnecessary |
| grapesiii chapter 28 . 3/25 It's been an entire of day of reading this novel and I just cannot stop myself. seriously. loving it till now |
| grapesiii chapter 10 . 3/25 loved this chap! |
| posum chapter 44 . 3/14 Loved this story and became unable to stop reading! I loved this Edward..mr CIA and Dr Cullen! Thanks for sharing and completing it! |
| Sandy Hester chapter 44 . 3/10 Thank you for this great story. I have throughly enjoyed it. When a writer is from another country I am not critical of their grammar. If they are from America I won't read it if the grammar is bad. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
| debb lavoie chapter 24 . 1/2 OMG! This story is so good. I'm on pins and needles. |
| debb lavoie chapter 10 . 11/1/2019 Ha! I knew calling him Edward would strike people as odd. |
| debb lavoie chapter 9 . 10/31/2019 I love Eli, she's adorable. I really like the mini interview before each chapter, very unique. |
| debb lavoie chapter 6 . 10/31/2019 I am loving your story! The tension is perfect and the story is interesting. |
| Just Sus chapter 42 . 3/1/2019 Ok, I just have to say this...I think Eli is cute, and I appreciate that EB adopted her, plus I know she is only 3 and had a hard life. BUT, I think she is a whiny, spoiled brat who cries all the time. I feel she needs more discipline, and they should not give into her all the time! Sorry, but this JMHO! Enjoying the rest of the story! Thanks! |
| Just Sus chapter 38 . 2/27/2019 Really? After all the shit they've been through, please tell me you aren't killing off Edward! |
| Just Sus chapter 35 . 2/27/2019 Absolutely heartbreaking! Esme should have not let them go w/o calling Edward! Poor Bella! What is in store for her? Can I please castrate James? Slowly? |
| Just Sus chapter 26 . 2/24/2019 Is Mercer Island where Edward grew up? No? I like this story, but Edward and Gale wear a "badge," not a "batch." Sorry, just a needed correction... |
| Just Sus chapter 21 . 2/23/2019 Ruh-roh...who the hell sent this? Glad Bella admitted to herself that she's in love with Edward! |
