Reviews for Highschool DxD - Return of Demon King Lelouch |
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Misaka Phenex chapter 1 . 10/12/2018 i wont read this because too short i usually read 60k up i just wanna say if he was reborn why did he not go sitri i mean sitri are smart like zero(his real name to long to write and im lazy) has black hair and violet aye and i see the lulu and sera pair i think code geass there where incest? |
darth56 chapter 2 . 10/11/2016 i liked this story to bad you did not finish it |
Sasuke75249 chapter 2 . 2/21/2016 nice what happen next |
Silvereye-BW chapter 2 . 2/10/2016 Loving it. Can't wait for more. |
emoryjmorrill chapter 2 . 1/6/2016 please update great story |
TykkiMikk chapter 2 . 8/30/2015 this story seems fast i guess im not too into it but allow me to say this. Thank YOU! When I saw a preview of Julies Kingsley on Akio of the Exiled I have been TRYING to find out who the fuck he was because he looked too much like lelouch and wanted to get answers and now i finally have them after a year of searching (maybe two years) so again Thank YOU! |
Zechs-DXD chapter 2 . 8/2/2015 Nice chapter hope you update soon |
Akuma-Heika chapter 2 . 7/16/2015 he would at least take 8 Mutation Pieces Ise is worth 72 Pawns? A little unrealistic. Considering Sirzechs wouldn’t be worth that much. "I'm a Devil already Sona..." Issei replied with a small sigh. Why is he saying he is a devil when he is a hybrid? Why was Kiba shocked about Lulu’s possible engagement? then I was found by Grayfia Lucifuge, who sheltered me because I was a Lucifer's descendant and then Sirzechs saved her and I accompanied them to Anti-Satan Faction... The Satan Civil War happened decades/centuries before Vali’s birth so how did Grayfia only just meet Sirzechs when she aided him in the war? Keep up the great work! |
Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 7/16/2015 Some grammar issues and Ophis is OoC. She would need to learn the emotions before she could really have them. It should be Devil God not Demon God. Demon God technically means “God God” lol. The Japanese root word for Demon is different than the English (which comes from Latin Daemon which in turn comes from Greek Daimon), while the JP shares the root with magic which is more in line with Western Devils when it comes to Sorcery. Demon God in JP is Majin (Magami would also work or Shinma but Majin is the normal form used). Devil God would be Akumajin (Evil Demon God). So is Lelouch above the Satans in rank? They are Daimaou (Great Demon Lords) while he is the Shinmatei (True Demon Emperor). A King is a Lord of Lords and an Emperor is a King of Kings after all. Shouldn’t Kiba be addressing him with the –senpai suffix? least 10 times stronger than the old LUCIFER (AN - Wikia doesn't describe Sirzechs' attire so I don't know how to describe it.)’ People should google it. much easier on you and them So Lelouch never summoned CC…it would be harder now to trick his friends and family. LuluOphis! …I would have liked Xenovia with him but since she is taken…Koneko? She will gain her sisters figure based on talks in canon and if Lulu is close to Rias but not Siscony like Sirzechs than her Peerage could get close with him and you already have Akeno joining his harem. Nonpervert who could really help Koneko with her issues like Ise did in canon, but much faster. I like the premise and how the fic is so far. |
Death of Snipers chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 when you said canon, I was worried this'd be another story wasted sticking to cannon, glad to see I was wrong and looking forward to more |
ApathyZero chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 Amazing story. Keep up the good work! :) |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/4/2015 why don't you pair lelouch with grayfia |
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 6/4/2015 hmm, not really sure what to think of this... well, Kuroka would be more likely to go with Lulu, same as Xenovia as both there interest is in strong babies and well Lulu shits all over Issei and most importantly, WHERE IS C.C? |
davycrockett100 chapter 1 . 5/15/2015 sweet |
ReaperAsOfLate chapter 1 . 5/15/2015 This is awesome! I like the idea of a badass Issei, but what I really want is for lelouch just beat the crap out if him without even blinking |