More harry in westeros please.

Rlly hope u countine this story

Very original story i wish there was more

No Harry why?! Why did you mindlessly kill the others. They're creatures too, just like the ones who's rights you fought for before. Just cause you don't know about them doesn't mean they're dangerous.

Meh, I like the first story a lot more than the rewrite. If you engage the reader more, make the Others beefier, and concentrate on aspects of the story where his magical prowess doesn't help as much, you won't run out of room to expand and grow.

Another excellent chapter. I'm enjoying this story very much.

A pity... I will miss your tales of Snowdrop.

Snowdrop's Wards reminds me of Winterfell's: as long as one born of the lands remains, the magic will hold.

Nice routine with the locals you have there Harry.

I wonder what the neighbors will think.

You should put the new version in a new story instead of continuing on the sale story

Cool

Well, not over powered is fine, but if you make him an underpowered pussy I won't be reading that either. Harry should at least be canon level powered and a survivor, not some whining, weak ass, emo pussy.

And Mathilda Bagshot? Who the hell is that? At least try to fact check names, Mafalda Hopkirk is, I believe, the underage magic lady. And he's obviously NOT in the UK so why would the silly arse think the underage magic office will show up right away?

Lastly, kinda harsh but he's stuck who knows where, he ought to at least see if Dudly has anything to help him survive in an unknown, freezing, snow covered wilderness. He's not got a broom and not wearing winter gear. So something like a lighter or pocket knife or even another layer of clothes could be life saving.

And yeah, the trauma he suffered can excuse not immediately jumping into action. BUT, Harrys whole fucking life til now has been a series of traumas, people abusing him, people trying to kill him, people he knows nearly being killed or actually killed in front of him. So I just don't think he'd be quite as bad off as some sheltered, spoiled arse like Dudley in this situation. He'd jump fairly fast into his all too familiar survival mode.

I look forward to the new version. I do really want to see Harry in a very brutal Westeros. That would be a really rude wakeup call to Harry. It would be interesting to see Harry trying to adept to such a harsh world especially since Harry has a tendency to try to make things fit in to his limited view point.

I was enjoying your story!
I'm sorry to see you are listening to those idiots at DLP. I sometimes go there to look for new fics in their recycle bin. All my favourite authors are hated by DLP. Count yourself in good company if they don't like your fic.

I really liked the old story and wanted to know where it was going!

This new story should be posted as a separate story and would have been better if Dudley hard survived so we could have the pleasure of seeing him miserable and meeting his grisley death in Westeros.