Reviews for The Rewrite
Gemsey22 chapter 2 . 9/29/2018
Ohh back together. Always.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2016
They talk and get back together.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2016
I kinda want Gail to call Holly and ask her to come to the dinner for support as her parents aren't accepting her. Holly comes and witnesses her parents putting her down and tells them how she sees Gail
TweetyGurl46 chapter 2 . 1/10/2016
Hi Happy New Year's I Would Like Lunchbox's Talk And Go On A Real Date Together Talk About Everything
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 2 . 8/27/2015
So quite honestly it's all a bit jumbled and a bit messy but I did like the concept
Guest chapter 2 . 8/18/2015
is it possible for you to update this story?
rhodon6 chapter 2 . 6/28/2015
Holly still show up at dinner and find out elaine set up gail with a blind date so holly claim that gail is her girl and this make gail excited and give holly a hot kiss which shock her parents and the blind date and bla bla bla. sorry,my mood suddenly so good
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2015
i like your story. like to see holly jealous and admit that is just a stupid set up.
Denise chapter 2 . 5/31/2015
Steve text Holly the address to come for dinner... Drinks, talk, go on dates, lunches...
Denise chapter 2 . 5/24/2015
Holly shows up to the dinner anyway? Maybe Steve was in on the idea with Nick? May not be good ideas just thought I'd throw something out. I like what you have. Thank you for writing a Golly. :)
Debby chapter 2 . 5/16/2015
You could go anywhere with it maybe have them work on a case that draws them back together.
MissPropz chapter 2 . 5/16/2015
Nice update thanks! Uhm maybe Elaine asking some questions about Holly but not in the most annoying way, just to get a little under her skin and after that to make sure she know that as long as she's happy they will support her and she should fight for what she wants.
joj14 chapter 2 . 5/17/2015
great thanks
nicasol chapter 2 . 5/16/2015
I think holly has to work for it a little perhaps a night out with the lab people and they all have the I'm scared of Gail but she's awesome things to say to holly
Missout chapter 2 . 5/16/2015
Nice... Need Golly, but would be nice to know what happens by dinner..! Then a chapter with Golly.. No SF thing would be nice - or if so long then fix the SF thing.. If you rewrite what happens.. :D
Thanks
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