I would've easily liked this story if it wasn't Disney's Frozen all over again.

"Do you really still want that brat, Elsa's company?” Wiping the tears of rage, anger and fury from her angry, glaring, narrowing eyes and cheeks, but also glaring at all the thoughts of not only anybody who openly does and shows nothing but favoritism towards Elsa over Anna but also Elsa too, Anna aggressively answered with a tone of voice filled with nothing but anger, fury, rage, hatred and disgust. "No."

THEN WHY DID YOU MAKE OUR FAVORITE PRINCESS A TOTAL BITCH IN YOUR STORY ANYWAY? HUH?

Aaaaa no Helsa please! Elsa doesn't need romance in her life. Them as friends is much better I think.

Man, Elsa never ever even deserve to suffer putting up with that stupid, annoying brat of a little sister. It's just not fair.

Ugh! Anna is entirely an ungrateful spoiled little brat. She never ever even deserve to be Elsa's little sister anyway. Who ever would rather want bratty, annoying little siblings or cousins? None of us do. Nobody does. Ever.

I love the story so far. Please update soon!

It's really good- keep going! :)
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YOU KNOW WE CAN'T STAND THE SISTERLY DRAMA.

You know, this really reminds me of "Jack and the Cuckoo Clock Heart." You'll have to see it to know what I'm talking about.

I like this. An interesting take on Frozen, while keeping true to the characters.

I would suggest one improvement, though; you state things that would be better shown, not told.
E.g. "Anna couldn't be more happier."
Show that Anna is happy through other people's observation of her reactions or through dialogue. This will help to increase reader engagement. Still, I'm looking forward to reading more of this.

Very well written beginning. I was wondering if this story is slated to be elsanna or not. My personal preference, is I only read elsanna, so a heads up on that would be wonderful.

Thanks so much for sharing, I wish you all the best in your writing.