The first story of yours I didn't like but I read all of it cause I love your writing amazing story and someone else truth good job

Boy, I'm glad I stuck around and continue to read, that was crazy

Hey! You are a really talented writer, this story is perfect, you Make us fall in live with the caracthers even thought they‘te flawed. Would love more of BPOV and a glimpse into their future. Thank you for writing

I actually liked it. I would hate net his situation in real life, but in fic it’s ok, I guess. And I WANT MORE! So much more! At least an actual conversation, adult conversation, between these two dumb asses. Haha!

I know its been years but i'm still hoping to see a glimpse into these two's future. I would love to see a relationship between them after they've grown and spent time apart.

UGH - how could just ending the story that way? It left me wanting more.

Ho. Lee. Shit. What did I just read? My kind is spinning with excitement. That was amazing. Period. I equally love and hate these characters. And although I feel like I’m left sitting and the edge of my seat, the ending was perfect. I hate it when people pull their stories to publish - but I’d be a selfish bitch if I didn’t tell you to publish this story. It is sinfully entertaining and surprisingly relatable. My new favorite love/hate. Awesome.

I so need more of this. I'm not sure if you had even planned to continue from here but damn! I've read this off and on for years and I get so sad reading this last chapter as I just want more, lol. Your plot gave birth to an even bigger plot lol. Where do they go from here? They both changed, are different, better people but they still love one another - no matter how hard he tried to fight it from Jail and up until this point. What happens with Charlotte? Granted I know they're not really labeled and he mentions that she knows it may go nowhere - it still leaves me wondering. Also, if they were to get back together, how would their family deal? That shit would be crazy lmao.

So what do we need to do for more? I'm not opposed to begging lol. I need more!

I loved this story but it feels unfinished. Please consider making a second part as that would be amazing!

Edward is just gross is this.

You are an amazing author. To be able to make your readers loathe the characters because it's too real. Absolutely loved this and all it's fucked up situations because it's as real as it gets. They both needed to grow up separately and it showed how good it made them both as individuals. Thank you for always writing some of the best stories here on ffn.

This story was so good! I went through so many emotions! Hating Bella then loving then hating again. Same with Edward. I laughed, I cried, I got angry, I cried again. It really threw me for a loop. Loved it all. Thank you!

I Really liked the story

Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

Eres buenísima escritora y me siento mal por no haber comentado antes! Espero continúes la historia

Llegue a tus historias de forma casual y realmente puedo afirmar que eres una muy buena autora. Deviant es maravillosa y está última me gustó muchísimo. Los personajes están lejos de ser perfectos y enojan bastante pero es genial la vuelta que le has dado a la historia. Es madura, real aunque moleste, coherente en cada parte y mantiene el espíritu que siempre busco en estos personajes que es su pasión y está necesidad con la cual viven su amor. Gracias por compartirla y espero seguir leyéndote.