Not bad but I liked the previous version more perhaps because it was longer so I knew the characters better.

this is pretty good. please dont give it up

love it so far! You do know that you put healing in twice on her book choice list, right?

Hope you update someday your reader are still here !

I hope that update soon

I love this, can't wait for the next chapter.

interesting characterization but I like it

With as many favs and follow this story has I'm surprised this only has 7 (now nine) reviews. Anyways I liked it. I think you followed Toms personality VERY well and I like how you could get into his head. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love a good, well written Fem!Harry...and this has the makings and potential to be a wonderful Fem!Harry. I cannot wait to see more!

a partnership... this is most interesting! a non-friend relationship but still friendly enough to watch each other back...i'm curious to how you will integrate this in the canon X) her father would be having an heart attack, she isn't good with transfiguration! X))) are you going to keep them in separate houses?

It was good! One question, where has the money come from? I think it has been a bit rushed. One second she isn't believing that she's a witch and then she's angry that her aunt hasn't told them that she's a witch.

I think that you should have developed more her first time in Diagon Alley (not word by word like HP books) but at least let people think that she was there.

I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I liked it, but I give an advice: it would be better uf you place your AN or some 'thought' that has ocurred to you while writing. For example, when you put (Dah-VID), yoy should have put ut at the end of the chapter. Or when you started talking about 'genetical' or 'sex-blablabla' (I don't remember the word lol), that kind of note should go at the end, once you have finished the chapter, because it doesn't look good in the story.

That's the one fault I saw, though the story was very good, I liked it.

X))) good chapter! Does she know about her values?

nice written! but tom riddle has dark blue eyes

Hey really glad you are back an writing again I really enjoy your stories, quite glad this story idea is back in the mix as I love how you write Danyte, looking forward to more!