Really enjoyed this story and am already liking the first two chapters of "Obscure" you posted. It's gonna be as good as this story was. _

Well done.

I loved this story so much. I am glad you wrote it. And now I am looking forward to more of chapters of Obscure. They are all so broken, Odin is trying to make good decision but he fails. Frigga was good at this but now when she is gone, Odin is lost. I am glad that Thor stand up for Loki and talked to Odin like that. I am curious about what will happen next.

Nice long chapter to finish up :)
Not sure if I'll check out obscure. I'm really only into loki whump - not all the avengers whump. But maybe...

There are times that integrating to the point of transcribing scenes and dialogue from the movies tend to be a tedious read, if not handled right. This story thankfully weaves through the original narration in just the right amount. And even if it is used as a flashback tool like others before it, it was done quite well.

And then I saw the pseudonym of who wrote it! Yay! I've followed a few of your stories, so I'm glad to find another one of your stories that I can enjoy reading in between real life tediums. Thank you!

Amazing really I hooe u keep writing it is a sweet story u got there I hope u put the friends of Thor or some other problem

I wonder were they are going ?! ;)
:3

Keep going is amazing :D

I like how your fitting the quotes from the movies and implementing them into your story. Not to mention I enjoy the flashbacks. I hope Thor will be able to help his brother out. And maybe Odin gets his chance to apologize as well as repair his relationship with Loki. Glad to see you've updated, eager for more XD

Good chapter. But I'm confused - I thought odin knew the truth and therefore had a change of heart about loki - why is odin still indifferent to his suffering and leaving him in the dungeons? In a previous chapter odin seemed to say he regretted not doing something sooner, which to me meant he would help loki...

Wow, this was so heartbreaking chapter but it had to be done. Thor cannot avoid this conversation forever. But now is also Odins turn to apologize. I am curious how he will react to Thors actions. I would like to know where Thor take Loki and who was that mysterious person behind barrier in the end. And why they waited two weeks to do something when they know true about Lokis time in the void. There are so many questions which needs to be answered and I really cannot wait for next update. I am really enjoying this story and I am looking forward to more.

Great chapter thank you

poor Loki, why is his character so easy to torture? gahhh so glad you updated! love it!

This is completely depressing and disgusting both Odin and Thor have known for weeks that Loki was innocent and they have left him to rot.

I legitimately got so angry at Thor and Odin in this chapter I started crying. When you hurt someone, you don't try to befriend them. You make it up to them, but never in the way Thor is hoping for. That's cruel. It's cruel to hurt someone, and then make them love you again. It's like a rapist forcing their victim to enjoy it- it's the worst thing someone could do to someone. I am so pissed.

I'm loooving this story!

The feels are strong with this one. Thor better dole out some snuggles, soon. Loki is too adorable to hurt. ;_;