Really great story! Thank you for sharing.

Such a painful but beautifully written story! I love that you gave Jack the courage to give both of them some closure. It's such a heartbreaking scene, but they both needed this honesty, I think. And then you let her call Andy in the end. *happy sigh* Perfection! Thank you so much for sharing!

Wow, great job making me not hate Jack completely! They have such an complicated relationship and it does play into her relationship with Andy. You did a great job capturing the way she speaks with both men. BTW, are you on Facebook and part of the Major Crimes Fans group? If not you should join us we have a lot of fun talking about the show.

I really love this. I am happy that Jack has grown enough to properly do his amends and mean it! Sharon and Jack's scene at the beach discussing and healing was beautiful. Andy being the supportive friend for her at the end was beautiful. Finally, she can move on and enjoy it with Andy. Great job!