lemme guess, shes preg

Eh me gured I am fangirling rite now

Aesome

Huh, I got some more grammar mistakes for you. I'm doing this all on my phone though, so I can only really copy and paste on thing. I'll try and poi t to the general area with the others.

"What's brought all the insecurity on in the firstly place," (Percy asking Annabeth about her insecurity). As you probably noticed, firstly isn't a word. Got to admit I don't see that mistake often.

You're grammar was wrong when you kept stating possession to. It's 's not just s. Ex: Percy's taco. Annabeth's vegetable, Sally's dog. Only time that changes is if the noun already ends in an 's'. Then you just use an apostrophe. Ex: The kids' dog.

Annabeth gave Percy a murderous glad when he told her he was right for once after they first met his mom. That came off as a little dark. If it was meant to be more humorous, you should've mentioned how it was a mock flare or there was some spark of lightheartedness in it.

There are a few more that I forgot. I'm just operating on my memory after all. I do want to mention how I felt Percy was too much of a baby in the last scene. I mean he immediately believed what Annabeth's mom said about her wanting them to break up after her saying several times otherwise. She even started going out with him again, so why he believed that is beyond me. Normally I wouldn't have cared, except I know this is going to involve a talk/argument that really isn't necessary.

Lol, can't wait to see what happens next:):):):)

This is a good chapter...drabble...whatever you want to call it really, but the grammar was a little off. First it's knock, not nock. Then piece in your bottom author's note was also spelled wrong. Finally, you misused the different spellings of there, their, and they're and also two, too, and to.

Lol. This story is hilarious. Percy is so cute. His stupid idea to fake stuff is hilsmurfalarious. Poor Tyler- his innocent brain addled with the acting. Wanna share Piper anyone?

"Good morning Aunty Annabeth" hahahahahaha :0

lol

Oh my goodness! Tyler. He doesn't even understand. Great work, loved the chapter.

I love it. I think you should do another chapter about the feild trip and then add an epilogue

Please do a reaction of him seeing her at his work place! Great chapter!

ASKLDFHJG PLEASE UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOOO MUCH!

Yes! They go out in a date! So happy you decide to make it more than a one shot.

Make Athena be royally pissed