I know you said you wouldnt return...but what about more HicElsas?
Would be nice to least see more stories...

Please least continue as Something!? There are at times good Frozen/HTTYD fanfics!
Will you be doing something similar or no?

This is one of the first works I read, when I started reading fanfic. It is nice to see if a like this, but sadly, there haven’t been as many Hiccelsa fics being updated or published. I hope someone adopts this story. I know I would, been waiting for years to see the next book. This is still good. I hope your passion for writing doesn’t burn out.

was looking through your upcoming stories and all of them are super interesting but due to how few Heather x Hiccup stories there are I'm most excited for that one

Sequel please. This is good.

When will the sequel be out? I definitely want to see it.

NAH GIRLY HICCUP IS ELSA'S ONLY

please make the sequel its awesome

I await the sequel.

Love love love on this is fab and ok when u put night rider I thought of the old tv show knight rider which is completely different but I just thought that it was funny but I like it tho I'm not saying I don't like it I was just saying that that's what I thought of when I saw it

Pretty good, a bit rushed at the end. And Hiccup will be a Prince since he was just a Chief on Berk. All in all and very good story.

Great chapter can't wait for the next story.

Oh your evil your killing me. great chapter can't wait.

This is quite strange. I wonder why my first review didn't appear on your story as well as my review history. Oh well, if the first one decided to pop out, I'll delete either that one or this.

Anyway...

The story has an interesting and original start. The plot where the Vikings needed to seek outside help to rebuild their kingdom and they weren't the one in upper hand hasn't been done before. Most stories would make the Vikings have the upper hand just because they have dragons so this story was a refreshing one. It had the potential for a political centric story if done right.

However, the rest of the story fell short, cliche, uninteresting and boring. Why? This is because you made Hiccup went through the 'coronation adventure', which is cliche. Coronation adventure are a trap because even if new characters are added, those characters would often have little to no impact to the original coronation adventure. They change so very little that there is no difference to the source material. If anything, they're just passengers in a roller coaster ride.

And this is the case with your Hiccup. What was worst was that your Hiccup has the personality of a bricked phone. He display very little emotion that he might have frozen his heart in the first place without Elsa. Not to mention that your pacing with him is too fast. As a result, your Hiccup is ineffective to the reader and to the plot. I can't emote with him because he feels like a robot and your fast pace gives little time to care about him as well. Then his impact to the story is nonexistent. What was the point of having him join the coronation adventure when he doesn't have much impact? No matter what he did, the story would go just like the original coronation adventure. You have Toothless fight Marshmallow, yet still the duke's men and Hans managed to get through. Might as well not include Toothless.

Because of this, it was quite boring to read Hiccup's experience on the coronation adventure because I could guess how it would turn out.

This story has potential and good idea for the foundation, but not much for anything else as of the moment.

Hmm. The story started interesting and original enough at the beginning. The Vikings making contact with the outside world to get help in rebuilding hasn't been done before in this crossover section. It certainly opens up the path for a political centric story and it would be amusing to see Arendelle having the upper hand in the negotiations with the Vikings. Most stories would give the Vikings the upper hand just because they have dragons. This story has a lot of potential.

But...

All those potential were wasted because you decided to use the cliche 'coronation adventure' route. Seriously, coronation adventures are boring because it is formulaic, even with extra characters. If anything, those characters tend to have little to no impact to the original adventure. They were just passengers in a roller coaster ride.

And this happens to your story. What's worse is that your Hiccup has the personality of a bricked phone. He is bland, displaying very little emotion and your pacing with him is very fast. Because of this, any part of him is...ineffective, both to the reader and to the plot. Seriously. I can't connect with him and he has little to no impact to the coronation adventure. No matter what he did, things would still happen like in the original Frozen.

This story has a good idea as as its foundation...but aside from that...nothing much to differentiate it from the rest.