I love the part on the party chat on backmailing. it is quite funny. nice job

This was a pretty good fic. I had wondered just how the demo would fit in with the full game, and I like how you did that here. Very creative.

Are you actually trying to tell me
That Magnolia DID NOT cry from the pain of having her back sliced in half
But DID cry for the loss of the magnolia Yew gave her?

That's... Really darn hard to swallow.

Are you actually trying to tell me
That Magn

In this chapter: Edea gets dogpiled to stop her from taking the cake, Yew upsets Magnolia, and Angelo accidentally gives them a Charm Cheesecake.

I loved seeing what you were going to do with this story and your thoughts on everything! I wish more writers would do that. What is the next story based off of? It sounds interesting.

I LOVE IT! I wish there was more, but this was amazing! You captured the characters perfectly, and it truly felt like this was from a game. So thank you for the amazing story.

Yay! They finally got married! Please update again soon. (I want to see what Yu will say to Magnolia).

Thank you so much for updating. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Aw! This is so sweet! This is so sweet! But I wonder why everyone and herself forgot?
And I still imagine Jean still having a lot of apologizing to do, though. He might have been trying to spare Yu the pain, but it still ended up causing more problems in the end. He's gotta trust Yu a little more in these matters.

Wow... I have no words... Only that this was amazing! Please update!

Update please!

Welp, Jean and Yu's friendship's back on the rocks again. :/

Oh boy...I sense a fight coming up.
I wonder what Edea had on Jean, though? It's started off so lighthearted and...
Fight, fight, fight!

What is happening?! Geez, this chapter brings up a lot of questions. Is there a spin where it turns out it's not Magnolia but someone else? I guess I'll wait and see.