Aaaaaaannnnnnnd my heart just melted into a pathetic little puddle. Well, it's always good to end on a high note, I say. I absolutely enjoyed this riveting adventure from beginning to very end. Very much looking forward to reading more of your work. Peace, and good day.

Holy. Crap.

That was pretty incredible! I thought for a moment that Hawke was going to let Sebastian live. Shows how perceptive I am. Great chapter. Worth the wait.

P.S Hawke's awfully open about her sex-life with Merrill isn't she?

Ohh and the plot thickens! Nice chapter -)

Fight scene was pretty epic. The three great heroes of Thedas engaging in battle side by side. Awesome. I apologize for flooding your inbox with reviews, but I simply cannot help it. This story is just too epic.

P.S I never liked Seneschal Bran. Also, will we perhaps see Isabella next chapter?

Interesting start! Nice to see Merrill and F!Hawke, good combo! They seem good together!

But I'm really intrigued. Going to keep reading! Darn Sebastian!

Oh god. Sabastian is scary g me a bit! And wow I vsfi g kirkwall.. Aveline is there right? Did carver stay s Templar?

They should have listened to her!

Quit your complaining Choir Boy! Even Fenris isn't that broody. After all, he tried to kill Hawke in the first place. Anyway, enjoying the story thus far. Will we perhaps see Aveline considering Sebastian has now invaded Kirkwall?

Damnit Sebastian! Just die already! Really, what a self-righteous asshole. Really liking the story, though I'm surprised Varric hasn't shown up yet.

Wow that was intense. Oh god, I felt so bad for Cecelia dying. Broke my heart -/. It made me feel better that it wasn't in the plan for Sabastian's assassination. Hmm if anyone is insane it was him, letting his hatred blind him -/

Damn good chapter

I hate Sebastian sooo much. He's always got his head up his ass. Looking forward to reading more, as always.

Oh gosh! Ahh nooo, cliffhanger ! Can't wait to see how you handle the battle scene. It's sad someone that fought and bled with Hawke (as Sabastian did in DA2) would resort to assassins. I can't wait to see what happens

Ahh, I like how you handled Josephine - I can totally see her reacting like this. I hope they won't kill Sabastian's wife but you have to do what you have to do

Nice! Sweet! I live Maherial as well -)

At least Merrill got to find out what happened -/

Interesting thing you did what with mixing two different Wardens. Pretty cool. As always, I look forward to reading more.

Story seems to be picking up speed. Awesome! Sounds like ol' Choir Boy has gone off the deep end. Really looking forward to more. I absolutely adore Merrill and (f) Hawke and you do them justice, my friend. Keep up the great work!

Wow nice beginning. I'd hate to bin Sabastian's shoes. I like your characterization of Hawke and Merrill -)