| Reviews for HayaHachi Dabbles |
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BlackCrystal06 chapter 6 . 11/1/2018 Lmaooooo! It was his touch that made the cat like him! Lol. And they both feel asleep! That First one was like, hilarious. |
BlackCrystal06 chapter 5 . 11/1/2018 Our one Summer Do you want to make me cry?! That's enough for my dramatic heart *places hands on my chest* Its crying out for them to be the same again. *cries* |
BlackCrystal06 chapter 4 . 10/31/2018 That last line! Made me choke on my own spit |
BlackCrystal06 chapter 3 . 10/31/2018 I love that Bestfriend one! Nah I love all scenarios! Fuck it. I love them all |
BlackCrystal06 chapter 2 . 10/31/2018 That first one is tooooo cuteeee! And also the one titles Borrowed. AWWW! I like that part when they kissed. That last one! hahaha! Lucky bastard |
BlackCrystal06 chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 Lmao! I like that sticky notes one! It isnt too hard to figure out that it was Hayato doing it Hahaha! |
Minerva Canillas chapter 1 . 6/1/2018 I just want to tell you that I LOVE these drabbles. Every story is so beautiful and has their own charm. If you can, please make more 'cause the world needs more HayaHachi fanfics from you. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2018 Wow this is gold... Especially the last one, it was so funny! Lol |
hawa-chan chapter 4 . 10/9/2017 Promotion: One of these days I really wish to see Hayato came home only finding his wife puking his gut out at the toilet and we know where is this going |
Alavi chapter 6 . 8/24/2016 I love love love this! Please continue to write more! :3 |
luiliu chapter 6 . 8/14/2016 omg i love your dabbles and im so happy to see you write them, and as always perfect |
Past Story chapter 6 . 8/13/2016 That last one was golden! Komachi is a little devil! Really cute! |
RianDownOnYou chapter 5 . 4/29/2016 Love the random stories so far, please update. You're the only person who writes HayaHachi and you write them beautifully. |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/2/2016 An update! What a lovely surprise after a long week. :) As always, you write some very fun little drabbles. Obvious and Prepared: Hikitani-chan~ Making a relationship contract suits him well. More than that, secretly being the type of person to have their life together pretty much planned out is adorable and somehow suits him even more. Flustered Hachiman is always fun to read. Our One Summer: This was a cute concept and a good idea for a request. The writing style lends to it's storybook feel. I can imagine Hayato and Hachiman adopting kids and Hayato telling this story to them as a bedtime story. "And that, children, is the story of how I met your father. Consequently, it's also a story about how he completely forgot about me, but hey, we're married now! I feel very accomplished because of that. Hehe." "Shut up. Don't tell our kids that damn story!" XD Meal With A Smile: Not as fond of this one, honestly. Although, the thought of Hayato saying, "Damn baby! You need some fries to go with those sweet buns!" did make me chuckle. While I can't imagine Hikitani every taking a job at a McDonalds, I feel like you've presented us with a very good idea of what he'd be like. His "smiles" would probably reek of poorly-masked (if at all) irritation and disgust. I would love to see someone ask for the "free smile" that you can order at Japanese McDonalds. Sorry for always having long reviews, but I appreciate having HayaHachi drabbles to read! You have lots of variety, too, which makes it even better. I'd love to see something with an OfficeAU or something with a Komachi shovel talk. I don't know why. I just feel like their sibling relationship/their point system is something that would be fun to see Hayato react to. Am I the only one who feels like Komachi would completely invite herself over and butt into their lives even if they got married and moved? Anyway, keep up the fantastic work! Thank you for updating even though I'm sure life keeps you busy! |
Bacon Powder chapter 3 . 2/13/2016 Has story named jealousy No mention of Totsuka (AKA best girl) ()︵ |