Reviews for The Forgotten Doctor
Commenter chapter 19 . 7/13
I personnaly cannot believe that the Aspect of Revenge or whatever is an actual thing. If her job is to resolve long standing grudges, then it makes absolutely no sense for her to get sasuke to hurt people AT ALL. Because it's things like that that CREATE long standing grudges. It's literally a betrayal of Shio when he attacks her. In a similar way to what Kalista was whining about Madara doing. So either she's a hypocrite which makes no sense since some celestial force has forced her to exist for a century, or she's lying to Sasuke, in which case he's pretty damn foolish for going along with it.
robert krause chapter 5 . 7/7
why not let Naruto /Mundo doing some fullmetal alchemist workings sir like muslces powers of he-men and some others warriors powers too , when Naruto had to think of doing some stuff in his home now , a cub size bed and a cub size box like room , and when his bath room is good and when in the 1 room is his office/books room , get to think why not let Naruto get back to the Namikaze house and his money now, living like a rich men and sill workings as a ninjas too,
robert krause chapter 4 . 7/7
sir why the fox had be pulling is not cool and 2 when ASURA is a past reincarnation of Naruto , when get his chakra in Naruto is good too, i Robert Krause was thinking it is good seeing naurto not need for his mom and dad too , but i Robert Krause get think of why not let Naruto had the clan money and home when his made to the rack of chuing and his mom and dad living in a little house west part of the clan house town , and his sister get her own house too only part of the old inn when she living in with her stuff form her mom and dad get her and for not gave stuff to Naruto for his own bich day , when Naruto had be to Ion plant shop get his posies and others stuff now, as for my pairing for Naruto is sarkura ion and ten-ten ,
robert krause chapter 3 . 7/7
sir i Robert Krause had to ask on Naruto teammates i get think of put him with ten-ten and ion and sensei is Kerry Leroy bower , former abut black ops cap ,coed name king cobra , when the tame be used to d racks jobs and a racks and then b and c and as s SS too jobs , Tenten and ion had rack of chuu and Naruto is abut black ops spy and killer too,
robert krause chapter 1 . 7/7
sir this dark path is not cool for Naruto and 2 if you read others ones who made fan fiction of Naruto why not do one when Naruto and his gril sakura had move to the whirlpool and the 2 rule it his the lord of it and she is head of mic laboratory and the 2 working in jobs like the a team had doing now, only thing is Naruto had his old ninjas vest and his wife had hers on too, he get the money form the bank and he had the old FLAG of his clan and took it with him and put up now on the top of the laboratory both his and his wife offices and workings laboratory and others parts too, like his workings with toixics and other stuff like king cobras and others kinds of the cobras , when his wife had her own mic school , and both be took out slaves city and money art and gold and others stuff Naruto and his wife had now, when then others of when his clan be form Naruto had find when his clan founder and his brother had foes too l, when Naruto find his foe old house and doing some fix up Naruto made a new clan house for his own used and sarkura too, living in now,
Guest chapter 22 . 6/26
you ruined the ten puppets of chikamatsu they aren't chiyos they were created by the first puppet master
abdultahir38 chapter 7 . 6/21
it doesn't matter what they fucking perceive themselves as they are brother and sister through blood so it is full incest stop saying its not full incest. I sorry but I'm dropping this because I can't read anymore incest stories it ruins the story you had a perfectly good story but you ruined it yourself
Rebmul chapter 13 . 6/11
you called yakumo shio
Rebmul chapter 11 . 6/11
uzuki
Guest chapter 4 . 6/4
Trash because sis x brother and spider I stop reading at minato says he's happy that man naruto is
ThatBlackMan chapter 1 . 6/1
when i read orochimaru shenanigans and mundo steroids i knew shit was about to get real
david chapter 14 . 5/27
doesn't make much sense to me that onoki is fine with sitting basically right next to the dude that killed like a thousand of his men.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20
Fuck you, and fuck your mother. The two-dollar cunt wished she aborted you. Oh, but since it's easy to forgive manipulations and that forgiveness is automatic and immediately given, forgive all those men who raped and beat your bitch mother. Go stick a gun in your ass and shoot yourself. You'd be doing your cum crusted mother a favor.
silverblade10101 chapter 23 . 5/15
I pity pore Isobu for being stuck with Lee
KarmasLionInGrey chapter 30 . 5/5
Gaara... the Hokage...? Wut? Wouldn't that be interesting.
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