Reviews for The Beast of Heroes
Callum Runchman chapter 41 . 7/11
This is wierd. I like it but at the same time it's very different from normal fanfictions. I'm kind of hoping there will be a big confrontation of sorts with the Olympians as I'm fairly sure that man in chapter 41 was Apollo and therefore he's likely breaking the boundary ban to visit his daughter. I also think it would be good for the Olympians to learn the truth about Artemis and Percy, along with all of their children. Zeus is likely to throw a fit when he learns that she has essentially 7 kids and is also married to a son of poseidon who is supposedly dead and his soul missing/faded. Hermes will likely lose his shit again when he learns Artemis is married a I wouldn't be surprised if he attacked Percy again.
All in all please update this more soon
HFelder03 chapter 1 . 6/1
Continue the story!
weirdhead chapter 2 . 5/21
She isn’t goddess of Archery more than Apollo. The hunters were only skilled than Apollo kids just because they had thousands of years to practise.
Megalania chapter 29 . 4/12
huh so in ancient greece Beer gave people advice?
aesir21 chapter 42 . 3/2
That magic spell will prove them all that he is more than baby in some aspects.
DP-Observant69 chapter 41 . 3/2
So Shirou from the Fate series, Cloud from Final Fantasy, Natsu from Fairy Tail, and Sora from Kingdom Hearts. Last two kids I have no idea
aesir21 chapter 41 . 1/20
Aww The joys and perils of motherhood.
aesir21 chapter 40 . 9/7/2019
Haha, congratulations Percy 3 boys that is wonderful
Whammmm chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
Why the fuck do you break the paragraphs so much. It’s fucking annoyingz
OverLordRevan chapter 40 . 9/4/2019
last line was funny
ChocoChomper chapter 39 . 8/18/2019
Thank you, knight 6991, very cool. Best of luck in your endeavours and the story you're looking to get published. I really hope that you'll be able to get this stuff done and it goes off without a hitch.
That being said, what about that guy from Sekiro? He *could* work, as they're both set in a feudal-ish (citation needed) setting, but it would make absolutely zero sense to have a Japanese lad in a Greek or European setting. Also, a little and frankly unimportant detail that's been bugginge for a while, didn't Cuchulian die after he tied himself to a standing stone and fought till the bitter end, standing up? It probably depends on the version you see and it doesn't fit the story to have him die, but not die and ascend instead. Oh well, I really love this story overall and I like how you just don't move on to the next great trial by combat, so to speak, and actually took time to set up the groundwork and the politics and everything. Really shows the amount of work and the passion that went into it. Keep it up! :)
Oh buddy chapter 39 . 8/11/2019
There is an anime called black clover and one of the main character’s magic may interest your story, his name is Asta and he has some type of swordsman magic
rescue 007 chapter 39 . 8/10/2019
Good
Piouspoppy41355 chapter 39 . 8/10/2019
Huh well there goes there chance for master chief to appear lul, was the first character I thought of lol. I love the story tho can’t wait to see wh lo u pick!
aesir21 chapter 39 . 8/9/2019
Awesome surprise for Arty. I am happy that their rule will continue and I am hoping she will reconcile with her father. As far as names go I have the following:
Gerald from Witcher
Kodlak or Acela from companions of Elder scrolls: Skyrim
Beast Boy from Teen Titans
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